~Drown in Love~ pt-23

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~Drown in Love~

part-23

 

 

hope I didn’t disturb your work..” said simmi….. “no … di… not at all… I was just going though from a file… nothing else…” he put his file on the table and sat in front of her….. “something important di..?” asked maan cause he can guess from her expressions, when she is worried then some thin lines appeared on her forehead, that’s y he can tell she is worried sick for some reasons…… simmi nodded and replied back….. “it’s related with geet…” she spoke and maan at once looked at her wondered what is it?

 

Although maan always had a stern face but now sternness was oozing out from his face…… simmi looked at him and sighed seeing him so serious…. “Maan…. Don’t be so serious..” simmi told him and he nodded ………… “di, you are looking so serious… I mean is everything alright?” asked maan….. though he was so impatient for knowing about the matter but he patiently sat in front of her……

 

Maan, , you know before two days I talked with geet but before that I had a talk with ridhima… geet’s sister…” told simmi…..  “so, what happened?” asked maan…. He didn’t know what’s the matter? Did she told to her something….. well he is referring geet as she…… “Maan, you know what, we girls always have a hesitation in arrange marriage…. I mean, in talking with a stranger who is going to be your life partner and the same thing applies to boys…I know that…. Boys also has emotions, hesitation to talk with a girl and I know you better than you know yourself…… ” simmi stopped in mid watching his expressions….

 

Maan was looking calm but so many thoughts roaming in his mind…..

Maan, a girl wants to open up a little with her would be husband before marriage so that she can’t face problems in her married life, so that she can get a better understanding with him….” Simmi stopped by his question………… “di, what do you want to tell me….? Tell me straight..” told maan….. and she nodded……

 

Maan…. When I asked to ridhima that you & geet talked to each other or not? Then you know what she replied…. She said only once…” she looked at him and watched him, maan knew that what is coming now and what simmi wants to tell him……  “then I talked with geet….. and when I asked the same question from her, she told, you both talked daily with each other….  But I knew that she was telling a lie to me, because I felt a sudden shock in her voice and then hesitation in lying to me… you know why she told me like this?”………  Maan shook his head cause how he is able to know all that……

 

because she doesn’t want that anyone will say anything to you about you r not calling her…. I am not blaming you…. I am just telling, being a girl, she can’t call you in starting…. Later she’ll be able but now…. It’s not possible for her….. and I know how shy you are in all these matter….. I won’t push you but I can advice you that pls try to call her, talk with her, try to understand her, not daily… once in 2 days…. ” maan was about to say something but simmi spoke before that…..

 

I know you’ll say, you have whole life to understand each other but maan this time will never come back…” simmi finished herself and stood up…. She patted his shoulder and left him there in study pondering thoughts over this matter…..

 

Dehradun

 

Geet put down her phone and squealed so loudly in happiness , ripu and ridz had to close their ears…… she jumped on both of them and shouting…. “omg…omg…omg…. I am so happy..” both tried to free themselves from geet’s hold but she held them so tightly…. After some seconds or a min, she sat back and they both had a breath of relief, they checked their neck, are they alive and geet frowned at their this act ….

 

geet, di… what happened? Who called you?” ripu asked….. “ haan di, why are you so happy?” asked ridzy…… geet looked at them…….. “you know what, I got a call from a MNC where I had applied before a month ago….they called me for an interview…..” , geet finished , ,

 

but di, do you think maan jiju will allow for the job?” asked ripu…. He is concerned for her, “but the main problem is, will papa allow you for the job? I mean marriage is over the head and ” geet stopped her mid…..”you both are correct… lets see..” her concern is correct… will her father allow her for the job that too at this moment when she is going to marry……

 

At night at the dinner table….. all were having a gala time with ripu and having a yummy food, ripu relishing each n every bit of the food cause he is having the food made by his mom after a long time..…. and the food made by rano is the best and because of her he became chef…..   trio looked at each other…..

 

ummm, papa, wo I wanted to talk with you…” said geet…. Mohinder looked at her….. “haan, beta bol…” replied mohinder…… geet played with her food and spoke again…… “wo papa, today I got a interview call letter for XYZ company…. Umm can I go ?” she stated……

 

He stopped eating and looked at her….. when he stopped, everyone present on the table stopped eating and waiting for his reply….. “beta, on this matter, I have to talk with maan’s family… after then I’ll able to reply..” he replied back…. It is not like that he is not happy for her job, but when a girl got engaged with someone then she has to do everything by asking from her in laws….. it’s the fact….  “ji papa..” geet replied understanding his condition at this time…..

 

Next morning, mohinder called in khurana mansion landline no. and maan pick up the phone, , “hello” maan said…. “hello…. Can I speak to Param khurana” mohinder asked…. …. “ji, wo to ghar par nahi hai…. Aap kaun bol rahe hai?” asked maan, he didn’t recognize his voice cause he is talking to his father-in-law for the first time…..

 

mai mohinder handa bol raha hu, dehradun se..” he replied back and hearing his name suddenly some emotions appeared on his face….. “namastey papa… maan is here..” he replied back….. well like a girl has to call her MIL and FIL as mummy and papa and the rule applies to the boy also…. He doesn’t know when the papa word slipped from his mouth…..

 

namastey beta… how are you?” mohinder asked…. “I am fine papa…. Aap kaise hai? Aur ghar mein sab?” asked maan…. “mai theek hu and ghar me bhi sab theek hai….” Replied mohinder….. “koi urgent work tha papa se?” asked maan…..  “aisa kuch nahi…. Mujhe aap se hi baat karni thi…” said mohinder…..

 

haan ji, kahiye papa..” said maan… “wo bête.. actually baat yeh hai ki yesterday geet got an interview call in delhi ” but before that maan cut him in mid…. “ye toh achhi baat hai na papa…” said maan…. “haan achhi baat to hai but beta, if you have not any problem in that..what are your views about this?”  asked mohinder….  

 

 

Sorry guys for being late….. now a days I am getting time cause I am taking student’s computer practical, after that I became super tired….. today I thought I’ll give 2-3 parts but today I face some another prob…. First electricity was not there then I found my lappy was also not charged… so i had to spent my  whole time in sleeping….. …

 

Maaneet meeing is not here….. today u might get there meeting if I could update 2 parts….. will try to update in Tuesday…..

 

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~Drown in Love~ pt-22

 

~Drown in Love~

part-22

Ripudaman Handa, , 22 years old….. younger than geet and elder than ridzy….  He is a chef and has a job in a 5 star Hotel, as a head chef…. He achieved a lot in this early age….. though mohinder wanted him to be a army man but he couldn’t do much when he wanted to be chef then let it be…. He agreed and he chose to be a chef…. His family and the first one, geet supported him……

 

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Ripu loves his sisters a lot and specially geet but that doesn’t mean he doesn’t love ridzy….. he love to tease her like hell while he love to shower love on geet as geet pamper him a lot….. and he was here cause he knew his geet di was sad little sad when he was not here on that day when maan & his family came here to see her……

 

she wanted ripu and rahul there but none was present from both…… afterwards, she fought with of both of them and they promised that in her engagement or in any other function related to her marriage, they’ll be present there………..

 

ripu, fresh hoja. Then we’ll celebrate rakhsha bandhan….” geet told him…….  As soon as geet finished herself, ripu at once spoke like he was waiting for this moment only….. “wait di…. I’ll have a good bath and we’ll celebrate festival also but in mid of that, I’ll prepare something for my sisters…. ” ripu spoke ……… “now tell me, what do you want to eat? Ridz, you can also tell….” Ripu asked……. “now why are you asking from me…..? mujhe kuch nahi khana…” ridzy showed some anger which is little fake, and ripu knew that what kind of anger she has……. Every time she is in teasing or fun mode then how can she show anger to anyone…………

 

aww, my darling little sister…… gussa hai…” he spoke pulling her cheeks…..  he pulled out a box from his bag and handed her…… “go and put this on gas…. Teri fav dish, I prepared for u only….. di, don’t touch her dish..okies…” he told to geet……. “okay chef…..” geet replied back….. ridzy jumped in excitement and licked her lips when she saw what her brother cooked for her……  it’s her fav dish which only ripu can make according to her taste….. she kissed him on his cheek and ran in the kitchen while ripu headed in his room for freshening up……

 

While on the other hand in Delhi, , everyone was laughing, joking and teasing , and Maan is the one who was tolerating the teasing session…… he couldn’t take it any more and stood up……everyone knew that he is irritated now…. Specially Vicky and raj teased him……  but Raj was the one who was giving him lessons which he learned after getting married…… “saale sahib….. ye jo shaadi ka laddoo hota hai na, ye sirf dur se hi meetha lagta hai, paas aane par pata chalta hai ki ye kitna feeka, tasteless or ye aapka stomach bhi khraab kar sakta hai….” And then hearing all that simmi fumed in anger…..

 

acchaa…. Ji….. what do you mean by tasteless and stomach khraab? Huh..! kehna kya chahte hai seedhe-2 kahiye….” Simmi standing on his head, I mean not proper on his head just standing beside of him and everyone muffling their laughter or amused laughter, poor Raj, he tried to give some knowledge or should I say tried to warn him but he made himself stuck in all this….. he looked upward looking at the god……. And mumbled….. “baba ji, save me..” ….

 

kya kaha?” she asked…. She turned towards maan who was still standing there…… “maan, don’t listen to him..okay…. he spoke rubbish all the time…. ” she told him….. “and marriage ke bare mein never listen his advice…got it…” she warned him where maan nodded looking at raj who was telling him something through his eye and even maan understood…… it was “will talk later..” which simmi didn’t get it……

 

1 min jiju, , didi aisa food banati jisse aapka stomach ki tie-2 fish ho jati hai?” asked Vicky leaning towards him on his sofa taking anshi in his lap while simmi glared at him, , and all laughed at his question but poor Raj couldn’t reply……. “why are you asking this question from me? Didn’t you taste food cooked by her…. ” replied raj….  Before raj, Vicky or simmi fought with each other more, maan interrupted in between…..

 

okay guys… me off from here now…. Mom, going in study… please send my black coffee…” he told and retired from the hall….. “even, me also off from here…. Going office, have an important meeting”… maan’s father said and went in his room for getting ready…..

 

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Dehradun

 

Ripu came back after taking a nice shower and straight went in kitchen and send geet & his mom out from the kitchen…… “chef Ripudaman Handa present at your service… tell me what would you like to have,,!” asked ripu and everyone stood there with his demands and told one by one while ripu started taking out all the ingredients…..

 

After one hour or so, he prepared all the dishes and then they all celebrated  Raksha bandhan happily……  later trio sat in geet’s room and ridzy showing all the photographs of geet’s roka to ripu and telling every little things which she got it in first meeting……. She told every single thing even geet’s meeting with maan on road also she told to ripu…… just then geet’s cell buzzed and she looked at the screen…. It’s flashing new number…..

 

She picked it up and she became very excited hearing for other side….  “yes-2… I’ll be there…. Thank you so much…” geet replied back…..

 

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Simmi knocked the door of his study room…. Maan didn’t like when any one disturb him when he is in study , everyone knew that but his family didn’t disturb him until it’s not important…..  “maan, can I come in?” simmi asked…… “come di..” maan replied back….. she pushed the door inside and entered……

 

hope I didn’t disturb your work..” said simmi….. “no … di… not at all… I was just going though from a file… nothing else…” he put his file on the table and sat in front of her….. “something important di..?” asked maan cause he can guess from her expressions, when she is worried then some thin lines appeared on her forehead, that’s y he can tell she is worried sick for some reasons…… simmi nodded and replied back….. “it’s related with geet…” she spoke and maan at once looked at her wondered what is it?

 

 

Another Meeting of Maan & Geet….

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~Drown in Love~ pt-21

~Drown in Love~

 

Happy Raksha Bandhan to you all…..  so what gift you got today from ur brothers??? Do let me know….

 

part-21

but geet stopped her in mid…… “bas…bas…. Itna sab…. I can’t talk with him properly over the phone..i can’t ask… I’ll discover after marriage…… chal bye…” she said bye before she could say something to her , cause geet knew that she will ask something and she won’t be able to give her reason…..  Geet wants to know him like he wants to know her…..  without asking, just got it by their acts……

geet resumed her story but unfortunately the story has moved little bit, , she cribbed over it and cursed her friend aashima for interrupting her in her story…… it was going on it’s very interesting mode but now she has to listen from mid…. Second half has been passed away and she missed the climax of the story…. Now the story was moving from here….

Ashish ek rikshaw mein baitha hua apne way mein tha jo ki shweta ke college ko jata hai, waise toh wo use uske ghar par milna chahta tha par shweta ne to saaf-2 keh diya tha, agar milna hai to college mein aakar miley par shweta ke ma-papa mein itni himmat kaha thi ki aashish ko ye bata pate ki aaj college mein union leader ke elections ho rahe hai aur unki beti iss elections mein most popular, most wanted participant thi among girls….  Ab hona kyat ha, jaise hi college ka raasta start hua, aashish ko to shweta ke ye big-2 poster dikhayi dene lage the….. aur jis par likha tha “VOTE FOR SHWETA….. hamari apni CHHATRI WALI” aur uske upar shweta ki big si photo…..

Now again the song came , again disturbing her from the story…. She sighed and listen the song but she doesn’t know when sleep took over on her and she went in deep slumber sleep while in Delhi, maan lied on his bed and staring at her photo trying to look deep in her eyes , like understanding, like her eyes speaking volumes and he is getting what she is trying to say…..,  he also doesn’t know when his eyes closed while staring at her photo, and her photo slipped from his hand and fell on his chest over the heart place……  like God is trying  to say that her correct place is in his heart……

After two days, , there is lots of hustle bustle in both houses, , people are running from here and there, and doing the preparations, after all it’s Raksha Bandhan and in Delhi, simming is coming at over there place while annie is cribbing for her gift…. Trying to know what she is getting this time while in Dehradun, geet and ridzy sat in the living room at the couch , their face is very sad, actually not face, they are completely sad, Because rahul, their brother is coming at this raksha bandhan…….

He tried to made them understand that his holiday didn’t sanctioned that’s y he can’t come but gee & ridzy are no where to listen…. They were cribbing over the phone even blackmailed also but nothing worked….. later trio reached on the solution……  Rahul reached at the nearer café and connected himself via web cam and geet & ridz also went ol….  They saw each other via web cam and talked and even tied rakhi….. he pulled his wrist in front of the camera and they tied like they are tying rakhi in real…..

But still they are sitting like before, with sad face…… their parents also couldn’t do something now…..  in Delh….. maan clad in brown sherwani with white chudidar while Vicky wore his denim, he doesn’t like these traditional attire much…..   now they are waiting for simran , they are very hungry….. it’s the ritual in their family that they won’t have anything until their sisten didn’t tie rakhi at their wrist…..

Vicky sat at the couch and pulled his face, making faces, cribbing cause rats are running in his stomach, he held his stomach and signaling at his mom & dadi….. “mom, dadi, pls do something na…” he said looking at them…. While they laughed seeing his face……  “Vicky, , don’t behave like a hungry cat… it’s only 10 now… and you are behaving like you didn’t had ur food from ages….” Maan told him…..

bhai, aap toh rehne hi dijiye…. You can manage but I can’t… simmi di. Jaldi aayo na pls….” he paused for a second then looked at annie,,,, “annie.,,,, pls u tie rakhi first…you’ll get extra gift from me..” he tried to bribe annie but she showed him her thumb……”vikcy bhai…. I am not that greedy, and I am not feeling hungry that much,….. so ur trick has been failed…. ” annie replied back…… “simmi di, kaha ho aap..?” he again cribbed and called for her…….

“tumne bulaya aur hum chalein aaye…… khana bhi apne sath laaye re….. ho..o..o… tumne bulaya aur hum chalein aaye re….” simmi sang the song while entering inside the mansion……….. all laughed at her song and Vicky jumped on simmi pulling her, made her sit beside of him and showing her his wrist, she got what he tried to say, and simmi denied, and turned towards Maan…… vikcy sucked his upper lip like a baby and all giggled looking at him……. “nautanki sala..” maan murmured….. and hugged simmi…..

Ansh jumped in her nani’s lap while anshika aka anshi chose to be in her father’s lap only……   Maan covered his head from her handkerchief and put his right hand behind his head…… simmi put tilak on his forehead , then put some rice above the tilak, now it’s turn to tie the rakhi on his wrist, , now she fed sweet to him, it’s time for her gift….  “happy rakshabandhan maan” she wished him , “to u too di..” maan wished back and he handed over her gifts, ,….

Simmi turned towards Vicky while annie tied rakhi on maan’s wrist…..  after the rakhi session, Vicky jumped on the food , but first they had, vermicelli that is mixed in milk…….. it’s a ritual to cook milk vermicelli on raksha bandhan…………

Dehradun

Their face suddenly lit up when the person who is most awaiting person at this time appeared in front of geet & ridzy, both smiled broadly and jumped in his arms when he stretched his arms like SRK style, and then he embraced both in the hug,,,,, geet & ridzy clinging on him like he is a teddy bear but he is not less than……

Ripu…. Kab se we were waiting for u…”  geet complained to him while he held his ears mouthing sorry to her…..  “ripu veer ji…. Aap to baat hi mat kijiye…..”  ridzy turned her face from him coming out from his embrace…..  “oye, ridzy… kyon muh phula rahi hai… gift nahi milega fir.,..” he told her making himself comfortable on the couch….  .

Ripudaman…. Kitna late kar diya…” mohinder told him taking his seat in front…. “papa, , you know na delhi se dekhradun kitna far hai…. Late ho gaya…sorry papa..”  he replied back having water which geet brought for him……

Ripudaman Handa, , 22 years old….. younger than geet and elder than ridzy….  He is a chef and has a job in a 5 star Hotel, as a head chef…. He achieved a lot in this early age….. though mohinder wanted him to be a army man but he couldn’t do much when he wanted to be chef then let it be…. He agreed and he chose to be a chef…. His family and the first one, geet supported him……

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Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri- pt 20-22

part-20

Vedanta who was sobbing like anything who fell asleep in her arms…. She mad her way to vedanta’s room and lay him down on his bed… she herself too the place beside him patted his chest , after a while he was taking his normal breath and he was sleeping calmly… she stood up and nany thanked her….  Geet smiled in return and told her not to tell about this whole scene to maan… she became confuse and then gave up, told her that she won’t tell anything to maan.. after all what it takes matter to her…. She is only care taker of this child….

It was the day after a week, geet and Vedanta mingled with each other very much, Vedanta starts loving geet like a mother and geet also loves him like her own child…. Maan also met with Vedanta but in morning and at night when he came from his office…. Maan still doesn’t know anything about geet and vedanta’s relationship with geet…..

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Tej was upset, sitting on his bed and was his deep thinking mode…. But the sadness on his face…. Tanya was observing him and looking at him… she never saw him upset like this…. She went near him..

Tanya-what happened tej? Why are you looking so upset? She asked from him holding him by his shoulder.. tej sighed and looked at his wife..

Tej-nothing actually missing my gudiya very much…..

Tanya-aaj achaanka, kya hua bahut pareshaan lag rahe ho? Geet se kuch baat huyi kya?

Tej-nahi bas aise hi, pata nahi kyo ek ajeeb sa darr lag raha hai….

Tanya-to isme kya hai… call her….  She took his phone for dialing geet’s number but his cell buzzed and geet’s name flashed on the screen…… Tanya smiled widely and looked at tej….

Tanya-dekha, geet ko yaad kiya aur uska call aa gaya…. She immediately picked her call…

Tanya-hello geet, kaisi hai tu? You know what just abhi we are missing you much and you called us…

Geet-I am fine bhabhi aur ghar me sab kaise hai?

Tanya-yaha sab ache hai, aur waha tere hubby ka kya haal chaal hai? She asked from her in teasing manner but color faded of geet’s face hearing maan’s name…. how can she tell to her about maan… she kept quiet for a moment…

Geet-yaha sab theek hai bhabhi, papa kaise hai?

Just then tej snatched cell from Tanya….

Tej-kaisi hai tu? He asked in his worried tone…

Geet-mai theek hu bro aur aap?

Tej-kya hua tujhe? Why are you sounding so low? Sab theek hai na waha par? He became worried suddenly hearing her low voice, he never imagine his geet like this.. she was bubbly and today she is sounding so low…..

Geet-everything is fine bro, wo bas missing you all…. Bahut yaad aa rahi hai aap sab ki… she sobbed a little….

Tej-arey-arey…. You are crying like a child… chup ho ja… mai aata hu na tujhse milne, stop crying…. She put the call on speaker mode…

Tanya-baby, what happened?

Geet-nothing bhabhi…. Bas aap sab ki yaad aa rahi hai subah se….

Tanya-ho hi nahi sakta… maan ke hote huye tu hamein miss kare…. Naah….. tej silent her because he knew how much sensitive his little sister….

Tej-tu itna hi miss kar rahi hai to aaja na milne, ya phir hum aate hai waha par….

Geet-no bro, I’ll come there on my birthday,

Tej-but tera birthday mein to 6 months hai….

Geet-wo actually I am going to join MBA, bas isiliye aapko call kiya tha….

Tej-wow… that’s a great news…. Kabse join kar rahi hai?

Geet-not now, wo actually I needed my degree and certificates for the admission form…. To can you please fax me my documents…?

Tej-of course.. just give me fax no. I’ll fax you….

Geet-thanks bro… she told him KM’s fax machine number and he noted down…

Tej-achha tell me which college or university?

Geet-wo, I am trying in AMITY or SHARDA UNIVESITY, which one is better?

Tej-these are very good university.. I think both are in GREATER NOIDA na?

Geet-ji bro…

Tej-dono me try kar le, dono hi best hai….

Geet-okay bro, achha now I have to go…. Annie is calling me….

Tanya-ok bye sweety…. And take care aur haa wapas aise rona mat…. Samjhi..

Geet-ji bhabhi….

Tej-will miss you so much…. Take care… love you

Geet-love you too bro and bhabhi….. bye and they hung up the call…. Geet cried more missing her family so much, crying for telling them lie…. She knew if they came to know about maan then they will take her with them back in Mumbai and she doesn’t want to go… she is happy here….  Just then annie came there holding her documents and geet wiped her tears at once….

Annie-bhabhi, don’t hide your tears from me, I know you are missing you family…. But am I not your family? She asked from geet making baby face and geet smiled at her antics…. She pulled her cheeks and hugged her …. Crying endlessly missing her bhabhi’s warmth…..

After some time, geet and annie were surfing net and collecting the info about MBA in both universities…. Just then Vedanta came after finishing his home work and stood near them, looking at both of them trying to understand what they are doing…. Both looked at Vedanta and then again engrossed in their laptop screen…..

Vedanta-mom, what are you doing?

Geet-ved, mom is filling her college form….

Vedanta-what is college? He asked in confusion…geet smiled at him..she ruffled his hairs..

Geet-like school….

Vedanta-sachi, you will also goto school….?

Geet-haan my baby….

Vedanta-then you will also do homework like me? Annie came and took him in her arms…

Annie-haan ved mama will also do homework like you did…. Okay…. Now go and show me your school book…. Vedanta ran and then annie helped her in printing the papers and filling the online form and kept a copy with them….

Again a month passed and geet did her preparation for the MBA entrance test though it was not government university but they took a test before the admission… she did work very hard for taking the admission in SHARDA UNIVERSITY, now the day came for her exam and she did it…. The result will come after a week , till then she have to complete her other work…. In this month Vedanta turned to 4…. Maan went to Bangalore for his business trip though he doesn’t want to go but office needed him… it was the deal for some fashion show in Bangalore and they want clothing from his company,,, KM TEXTILES is one of from the best companies in India….. maan has his other companies in different fields and KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS  is also 1 of from them…. Maan did charity a lot and he has many branches of his companies in other states… and some are out of India…

Maan loves Vedanta a lot but he met with him a little means he is not able to give his much time to him…. one side his tension towards sameera then office, hospitals and home… he couldn’t able find time for himself…..client meetings in his 2-3 offices in Delhi and site visiting…. But still he managed his temper as everyone knew he is short tempered person and lost his temper very easily…. But between in these works he never forget to drop Vedanta to school and checked his books in morning…. He daily got up early in the morning around 6 am, did his exercise and get ready… geet also wakes up early in the morning and made Vedanta ready for his school and went in kitchen for making breakfast but never came in front of maan…. She also told to Vedanta that never talk anything about her in front of maan and he is very intelligent boy, he agreed….

It was the day again sameera got an attack and threw everything on the floor, nurses try very hard for controlling her but at last they landed to injecting her and then she went in deep sleep….

Maan was in bangalore so this time geet enjoyed her time with Vedanta.. full time with him, roaming everywhere in KM without nay tension though she knew maan didn’t came at home in day time….she never try to visit out house because dadi denied her….

After 2 days the girl is sleeping and she felt the vibration of her cell… she opened her eyes and looked here and there if anyone is here or not…. She felt relax not finding anyone near her… she at once took the call and whispered….

Person1-hello lady…. He spoke to her via phone with his most killing attitude….

Person2- finally….. thank god you have called me…. Where were you from past so many days?

Person1-sweety…. Just relax…. Calm down…. Now tell me what’s the problem?

Person2-ohh dam with your relax…. Here everyone is getting my nerve and you are telling me to calm down….

Person1-OMG my lady hitler…. You are so angry…. Take a chill pill babes….

Person2- don’t made me lose my patience , come here fast and tell me where are we heading?

Person1- oopss sweets… I can’t be there till 2 months….

Person2-what…? Means I am stuck here for another 2 months more… do something fast…..i want him at any cost otherwise you know what will be the consequence…

Person1-oops, you turned to your angry mode… sorry babes…. Just wait a little more… I have something… will tell you later… right now, do the same thing which you are pretending….

Person2-okay…. And they hung up the call…………..

 

 

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Person1-oops, you turned to your angry mode… sorry babes…. Just wait a little more… I have something… will tell you later… right now, do the same thing which you are pretending….

Person2-okay…. And they hung up the call…………..

2 days passed from that day, maan came back from Bangalore…. He completed his office work and then came home at night, it was late…. Everyone was their bed as usual everyone was sleeping at that time…but the one person was wide awake….. she was in vedanta’s room, making him sleep , she heard the skid sound of tyres and she knew that it was maan…. she hurriedly went in kitchen and warm the food and told to nakul to serve him and don’t tell anything to him….

Maan came and freshen up, ate his food…. Actually he relished the food, he really missed this food…. He doesn’t know who cook this food but he is loving this food, after all it’s cooked by geet but maan doesn’t know about this fact….he never fond of such food but suddenly he felt a new kind of taste in food and he starts loving it….he never licked his finger after eating chicken curry but now he licked it… he couldn’t believe on himself that he is licking his finger which he never did….

2 months passed like this….. sameera is doing good and maan is taking care of her, at the same time he is taking care of Vedanta but he never came home in day time….

It was the day, 8 am in the morning, geet is doing everything in such a hurry, putting her every document in her hand bag, making ready Vedanta at the same time, she made breakfast too in a hurry with never forget to make maan’s fav black coffee , pasta with pesto sauce…..

Finally she finished her every  work and took blessings from dadi maa because it is her first day of her college…. She took admission in SHARDA UNIVERSITY…. She took her car with driver and zoomed out before 2 hours because it takes 1 and 35 mins from there to GREATER NOIDA and delhi’s traffic you know….

She is soc excited fr her first day but she is missing Vicky and alka as well… she took out her cell and put it in a conference call with Vicky & alka….. Vicky was a lazy bum sleeping still while alka was getting ready for her college…..

Alka-geeettt……….. kaisi hai tu? She asked in such an excitement because she is talking to her after so many days…. Geet covered her ear and took away her cell from her ear………..

Geet-why are so shouting? I am good and you? Alka made a face…

Alka-as if you didn’t shout…. Remember when I called you from Canada and then OMG tuney kitna shout kiya phone par…. Pata hai  dusre logo ko bhi pata chal gaya tha ki duri taraf koi pagal ladki hai….

Geet-alka…….!! Mai pagal hu,

Alka-le, ab tuney hi to kaha tu pagal hai… and starts laughing……..

Geet-achha chhod, pata nahi ye Vicky kaha hai, he is not picking cell, call conference par hai….

Alka-as if you don’t know…. I am sure hamesha ki tarah so raha hoga

At the same time Vicky stir from his sleep because of continuous buzzing sound of his phone…. Somehow he grabbed his call without checking the ID…. Kaun hai?

Geet-vicky, you are still sleeping? College nahi jana? Vicky jumped hearing her voice….. he rubbed his eyes, he should rubbed his ear but he was rubbing his eyes……

Vicky-ye tu hai geet? He asked to her thinking he was dreaming….

Alka-nahi uska bhoot bol raha hai Vicky….

Vicky-tu kaha se tapak padi bich mein, abhi to geet thi na

Geet-duffer, conference call………….

Vicky-ohhh…..!!!, btw I was sleeping yaar….

Alka-tu ek din apni neend nahi khraab kar sakta, kaisa friend hai tu….

Vicky-dekh meri friendship par mat kuch bol… geet became irritate his cat-dog fight…..

Geet-guys…stop it…. Meri bhi to suno kuch…..

Vicky,alka- haan bol and trio laughed in unison….

Vicky,alka-kaisi hai tu?

Geet-I am fine yaar aur tum dono?

Vicky, alka-hum bhi ache hai….

Geet-I have a news for both of you….

Alka-kya?

Vicky-arey jaldi bol….

Geet-ok , ok don’t start again…. I am very sad….

Vicky,alka-what…????? Ye good news hai?

Geet-nahi ….. tum log reason nahi puchhoge ki why I am sad?

Alka-achaa baba, why are you sad?

Geet-because me missing you all…..

Vicky-awww my doll…. Me too missing you so much…. Tere bina college jane ka bhi mann nahi karta….

Geet-same, mera first day hai college hai that’s why I am missing you two….

Alka-me too missing you yaar…. I know you will made new friends there too….

Geet-I knew that…..

Vicky-but not better than us…

Geet-I knew because you both are the worst friends of mine who never missed me, who never called me.. and showed them her fake anger….

Alka-don’t blame us ok…. You are the one who didn’t call us, who engrossed with her maan… waise hows maan?

Vicky-kaisa hoga, bechara geet ko bhugat raha hoga and starts laughing…..

Geet-very funny….. my college came, will talk to you later… they bid bye to each other and geet reached to her college which is new for her.. she doesn’t know anyone here, not even a single person… annie also studied in some other college, she also can’t help her but she knew GEET HANDA never fears from anyone, oops did she called herself GEET HANDA, yes she called herself geet handa, being a khurana, she is still borrowing her father’s surname….. what an irony na…. every girl wants to be mrs. Maan singh khurana and here she is but she is not able to use the surname….  She felt bad but then she relieved that no one won’t know her that she is mrs. Maan singh khurana….. otherwise it will be difficult for her being a khurana, just then she checked her forms and other documents, everywhere she filled GEET HANDA and SINGLE…. She sighed and put them back in her bag….

She reached inside the college after enquiring to other students who are looking at her like she is an alien because she was wearing a white chudidaar suite and the students of SHARDA UNIVERSITY are high profile, who gave a dirty & pity look who are in salwars aur looks like a behen ji types…. Geet felt awkward because of their looks, she knew because of her dress, she never wore these kind of dresses in college, she made up her mind that now onwards she will wore jeans at least she will look a little bit decent…..she felt like she moved out from here in a fraction of second before anyone insult her but now she can’t back out from here….. she made up her face strong and went to principal’s office, principal greeted her because ARJUN RATHORE informed him…. principal knew arjun a little because arjun’s company constructed a little part of their college of their another branch….

Both talked a little and principal told everything about the college and discipline and if she gets any problem then directly came to him and informed him without any hesitation…. She nodded and went out from there….. she went to library and applied for her library card…. It was around 1pm and then she collect 1-2 books for just information…. She was lost in herself……

At the same time in same college, in corridor a couple is fighting or should I say the girl is teasing the boy with her antics……

Piya-He is so sexy, abhay gave her his glare but she ignored….

 


Piya-dam hot, PIYA…!!! Abhay called her….

Piya shrugged off…. Don’t disturb me abhay…. Let me analyze him

Abhay-you can’t do this to me…. He made a baby face but passing his glare to her….


Piya-don’t give your these glares, understood… these are not gonna be working on me.. she tapped her foot and then again looked in the magazine and read the article……  OMG look at his rough stubble which looks more manly In this magazine… and you are so cleaned shave…. Piya checked abhay’s face and engrossed in the magazine while abhay traced his cheeks with his fingers….

Piya-now stop checking yourself and let me concentrate on my hotty….. abhay’s eyes popped out from the socket hearing hotty word from her innocent piya’s mouth…. She never called him hotty and today she calling him hotty…. He looked at himself….

Piya-oh my god if I looked him in real I am sure I’ll be faint….she rest her hand on her cheeks and blinked her eyes couple of times….. she was dreaming with her opened eyes while her boy friend cursing her under his breath….. he sat beside her on the bench peeking in the magazine… he starts playing with her curls for gaining her attention but his piya is in her lala land, she wacked his hand again starts her dreaming session……

Piya-uff, he is looking damn eatable  and licked her lips,while abhay’s mouth dropped open seeing his piya like this….

Stop this Piya…. How can you praise any other man infront of me….. chided Abhay to her girlfriend….. piya gave her cheeky smile to abhay who was following her everywhere… actually she was giving him punishment for being late yesterday… she didn’t said anything him yesterday because she doesn’t want to destroy her date but now she is taking her revenge from him…..

Piya-ohhh my sweety abhay…. Are you feeling jealous…..? she asked making an innocent face…

Abhay-ofcourse, if any girlfriend will praise MAAN SINGH KHURANA in front of her boyfriend then any one can be jealous….

Piya-really, but looked at him, he is so sexy na…. look at his biceps abhay… have you also biceps like him? she looked at his biceps trying to hold them in her tiny palm but unable…. He smirk at her while she gave him her weak smile knowing he has also big biceps…. Abhay smiled but his smile vanished when her next praise fell in his ear….

Piya-look at this pic abhay, he is smoking hawt…. Six pack abs but I can’t see them because he is wearing his office attire na….

Abhay-piya……..

Piya-what piya? Wait a minute, have you also six pack abs? she asked him in such excitement…. Abhay gave his sexy smirk to her “of course I have and more than this MAAN SINGH KHURANA”

Piya-wait, wait, wait…. Where you saw his abs, OMG are you lesbian?

WHAT……..!!!!!!!!!!!! exclaimed abhay in such a shock…. His eyes were wide opened while he mouth fell opened in big O shape…. He felt like murder this right now but can’t do this because he love her so much….. he closed his eyes and count 10-1 and let out a breath….

Abhay-have you gone mad? He asked in his calm tone as much he can….

Piya-sorry, but you never showed me your six pack abs…. then she bit her lip knowing what she blurt out….

Abhay-so you want to see my abs…. huh..!! she denied but he came close to her and the magazine she was holding fell down from her hand, geet was passing right there and it fell on her feet….

 

 

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Abhay-have you gone mad? He asked in his calm tone as much he can….

Piya-sorry, but you never showed me your six pack abs…. then she bit her lip knowing what she blurt out….

Abhay-so you want to see my abs…. huh..!! she denied but he came close to her and the magazine she was holding fell down from her hand, geet was passing right there and it fell on her feet….

Geet looked down to her feet and found a magazine there…. She turned her gaze and found two love birds in their own lala land, she smiled at them and bend down for taking the magazine but she gasped after seeing the pic…. She admired the pic silently , there is no bad thing in admiring her own husband, well the pic is her hotty husband….. she knew there is no relation between them , the name sake relation they had but that was only for her but she can at least admired his hot looks, well he is all for her, at last he is her husband, naah her so called husband but only for her…..

She gulped hard imagining the kind of stuffs in her mind seeing her hotty husband and then shrugged off her thoughts and turned to see the couple who were staring at each other lovingly…..

Geet-ahem ahem…. She coughed a little for gaining their attention and they came out from their dreamland….. piya was red due to caught red handed wo bhi by the unknown person…. Abhay looked here and there for hiding his face where geet was having fun seeing their state…. She was feeling like she was in mumbai with her friends and she caught a couple red handed in her circle….

Geet-erm…. Sorry for disturbing you both but your magazine…. Piya’s eyes popped regaining the admiring session was disturbed because of this abhay…. Grrr she hates this….

Piya-thanks god, I remember….. she took the magazine form geet’s hand and turned to abhay who was baffled seeing her angry expression though she looked more cute with her angry glares but who told her this…. He wants to eat her those red cheeks but poor soul is helpless……

Abhay-what? He asked innocently while geet stood there seeing their fight….

Piya-just because of you, my admiring session disturbed…. I was admiring this hotty MAAN SINGH KHURANA and every time you made me disturb….. she shoot out the glare while geet’s mouth fell open knowing she was admiring her hotty husband….. well she wants to murder this girl right now but couldn’t…

Abhay-so, when you will try to admire him, I’ll always disturb you, after all I am your love not he…. So admire me….. piya starts mimicked him meanwhile geet burst out in laugh and both looked at geet like a alien…. Geet looked at them and immediately controlled her laugh and said sorry to them…

Geet-sorry, wo actually you both were looking so cute and was like a tom & jerry fight so I couldn’t myself … sorry again…..

Piya-it’s ok, btw hi I am Piya Jaiswal…..

Geet-hi, I am Geet….. well confused to tell her surname so just told them geet……

Abhay-I am Abhay Raichand…. 

Geet-nice to meet with both of you…..

Abhay and piya- same here in unison…. They passed smile to each other and here the chatter box of SHARDA UNIVERSITY starts her chattering……

Piya-hey geet, are you new here? Wo pehle kabhi nahi dekha na, well lagti to new hi ho fir bhi I thought to ask you…. Here abhay was looking like she can’t change where geet was thinking she is too much chatter box than me…. Geet smiled at her…..

Geet-yeah, I am new here, just today my first day in MBA….

Abhay-ohhh wow…. We are in MBA and the session starts from today….

Geet-yup, I knew it…. I think lectures will be start after 3-4 days?

Piya-haan…. But starting 3-4 days are full of fun… just like today I got a new friend…. And they talked for a while and they retired to canteen…. Have some snacks and they became nice friends of each other…. Well in a day geet got 2 new friends at new place…. She was happy today…. After a long time she came out from the house and met with 2 new person who are full of life like her…. As she was in mumbai with full of enthusiasm…..

The college has been started and it makes geet happy…. 2 months has been passed like this…..

 It was the another day, they were sitting in garden making notes, they were engrossed in their studies, professor gave them a project over SOLE PROPERTRIOSHIP and told them to chose a firm and gave them a report , collect all the info, their marketing plans, business plans, shares, liabilities, assets, about the name in market they have, about their MD, CEO and directors, everything about the firm…. Abhay, piya geet and another tow students more are in a group,,,,  it will help them in future and later in the last semester of the MBA, the college held a competition and companies came here and the rapid fire and question session held between the MD of company and the students…. Firm asked the questions and if students passed then they get internship in their firm….

Abhay- geet, I think we should chose my dad’s firm… we’ll get all info very easily…

Geet-what is the name of your dad’s firm? She asked to abhay while writing down notes….

Abhay-RAICHAND ADVERTISING & CO. you can also suggest another companies name , I am not forcing….

Piya-I think, we should take another firm as it will be not good, can we take some caf or lounge or any other firm, it is not necessary to pick only business company…..

Geet-I think you are right but it will be better if we chose any business firm as we are students of business stream….. ummm what about KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONSA? (She doesn’t know that maan owns this company…. She knows only that maan has khurana textiles…she has suggested KC unknowingly….)

Abhay, piya and other two agreed with her and they starts their project…..

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After a week,at night in outhouse…

Well everyone is sleeping in KM and nurses also sleeping in outhouse…. Just then sameera’s cell buzzed, it was on vibration mode, the caller knew when he should call her, actually sameera gave miss call to the person and the person called back to her…..

Sameera-when are you coming yudi?


Yudi –I am coming tomorrow, have little patience…

karanveer bohra as yudi ,,,,, yudi is his nick name… will reveal his real name later…

 

Sameera- have you some more plans? I mean you were mentioning last time about something…..

Yudi –yup, I have arranged everything, I have talked to doctor and he agreed…. He will made him understand by his own way….

Sameera-superb…. How much you paid to that doctor?

Yudi –none of your business….. just do that what I am saying to you…. He told her and she agreed…..

Sameera-this maan is such a big fool…. I couldn’t believe that the great business tycoon MSK has been fooled by me, years went and he was like a total brainless person, he loved me a lot

Yudi –and that’s why you are taking his advantage….. both laughed….

Sameera-not only me, you are also taking advantage…. After all you grabbed the project from his hand…. He smiled hearing sameera….

yudi-of course, I want to finished him, he did very wrong…. You are snatching humanity from him and I am snatching his business from him….

Sameera-but we have to be careful , don’t forget he is MAAN SINGH KHURANA,  she sound little bit scared….

Yudi –MAAN SINGH KHURANA is my foot….  Don’t be scared from him…. he is like bullshit…. Just wait and watch….. hey what about that girl with whom he married?

Sameera- oh that girl, I heard that maan and that girl has not any relationship like a husband & wife….

Yudi –good for us…. And this is because of you, he is mad in your love….

Sameera-tabhi to, both are not in relationship…. Poor that girl….

Yudi –I am pitying on that girl….

Sameera- no need to be pity on that girl, she came here for snatched maan from me…. Uske sath achha hua…. She greeted her teeth…..

Yudi –hey sam, don’t be so cruel…. Uska kya fault iss sab mein….

Sameera-ohh just forget it…. Thanks to you that you told me how to handle Vedanta otherwise I was stcuk here with that child…..

Yudi –ohh don’t thank me… it was my duty towards my best friend…. Now tell me in detail what you have done with yours so called child?

Sameera-ohh don’t ask me…. You know I froze when I saw Vedanta with maan…. I was so scared and then your suggestion came in my mind and I did the same thing which you told me before two days….i started screaming as much I can, and maan tried to give Vedanta to me but I jerked him….  I know Vedanta hurts when I jerked him but I have not any other option….i know he felt bad but he was became he headache of mine…..

Yudi –I can understand…. That was unwanted child of yours…..  don’t feel bad, btw he has his so called father maan…. I was thinking maan loves Vedanta or not?

Sameera-of course he loves him….  and you know what he bought a land on vedanta’s name…

Yudi –oh that’s great….  They chit chat a little bit more then bid bye to each other and sameera starts her drama…..

 

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It was the day after 3 days,

Sameera’s doc called to maan and called him in his clinic….. maan thought it would be urgent so he finished his meeting early and went to hospital…

Maan was waiting for his appointment in waiting room just then his name announced and he went in his cabin…

Doc-come in mr.  khurana.. have a  seat…. Maan went inside and grab the seat….

Maan-what happened doctor?

Doc- actually mr. khurana, I wanted to talk to you something important about sameera….

Maan-what happened doc? Is anything serious?

Doc- ohh don’t be panic mr. khurana…. Actually I have researched on the disease which sameera has…. And I found a famous doc in EUROPE….

Maan-ohhk….. he signaled him to continue…..

Doc-actually I was thinking to refer sameera to Dr. Kelley Pit….

Maan-it would be great if he agreed for this case….

Doc-yeah…. I have talked to him and send her reports and told him about her history and for  a luck he is interested in this case…. He wants to meet this patient & treat her…..

Maan-is there any chance in her recovering?

Doc-yes, there are lots of chances as he told to me after seeing her history & reports….

Maan-that it will be great….

Doc-yes mr. khurana…. I want to send her there after 2 days as I have to go with her and I want to meet with the doc personally….. maan nodded….

Maan-okay , I’ll arrange everything for both of you…. Maan grabbed his cell from his pocket and punched adi’s number and told him for arranging 2 1st class flight tickets…. And after 5 mins, adi called back to him and the tickets confirmed…..

 

 

~Drown in Love~ pt-20

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~Drown in Love~

Part-20

 

 

Vicky turned and fell on the floor tired fully….. annie looked at him trying to drag him from there but he didn’t budge from his place….. “hippo, kitna khata hai… hilta hi nahi… chal yaha se..” she told him….. “haan jaise kit u to slim trim stick hai… jaise ki hawa ka jhonka aayega aur tujhe udaa le jayega” he replied her back , finally stood , went in his room and direct fell on the bed , feeling sleepy now……

 

Flashback ends….

 

His lips curved in a smile when he glanced at the full shined moon standing at the window, when he got a glimpse of geet’s face in moon….moon was shining like it got his chandani just like him……  he put his hands in his track pockets and sighed deeply, he wants to talk to her but don’t what to say beside of hello…. After that he didn’t talk to her and he knew she must be waiting for his call but what to do, he couldn’t gather enough courage to call her by his own…..

 

He knew that, that day Vicky did something but he didn’t said anything to him for his mischief cause he liked it for the first time…he didn’t felt offended … he loved his siblings too much and he can do anything for them but in a limit only….. if they are doing something wrong then he has the responsibility to made them correct not to help them or ignore them….. and that’s the thing he was doing till this time, but this time he liked his mischief even he liked his teasing cause it kept him reminding about his relation with geet…… hot it will look like….?

 

While on the other hand Geet lied in her dim lighted room and stared at the ceiling but her eyes and heart dreaming about him…..  Her ears and mind was filled with the love story she was listening with a great concentration and imagining herself……

 

Aisa nahi that ki Aashish shweta se pyaar nahi karta tha, wo toh bas kashamakash mein that ki kahe toh kahe kaise….. shweta , jisey log chhatri wali(umbrella girl) ke naam se jaante hai, jo purey college ki union leader hai , jo wahi bolti hia jo uske mind mein aata hia, bina soche aur bina samjhe…. Ab uske aagey aashish apni baat rakhe toh rakhe kaise….? ye sabse badi uljhan thi……

 

Geet was lost in the story which she was listening and trying to think what will happen now? What aashish will say to shweta? She couldn’t relate anything now cause now the song came in between the story….  She was imagining herself in one of story told by Neelesh Mishra, the story teller…… she is a big fan of his stories but she got a new problem cause she remembered his one story which was based on arranged marriage….. and it was quite interesting…….But soon she brought back from her dreamland when the song finished and the story started again…… 

 

  Shweta ko shaadi ke liye manana bahut hi mushkil kaam tha….. aur uske ma-papa badi hi uljhan mein the, kyunki shweta to bas apna career college ki union leader mein hi dekh rahi thi….. aakhir kaar usey ladkiyo ka future jo banana tha…… chhatri wali wo yuhi nahi famous hai….. hamesha uske ek hath mein uska bag aur dusre hath mein uski chhatri means uska umbrella hota hai….. jab bhi koi ladka uske sath ya kisi aur ke sath badtameezi karta hai toh bas kya hai, wo fat se apna umbrella itni speed se kholti ki wo jakar uss ladke ke stomach me lagta hai aur fir jo pitayi karti uss ladke apne umbrella se…… Sham ke 7 baje shweta ke ghar ghanti baji….. darwaji ki ghanti nahi, phone ki ghanti baji… aur hath saaf karti huyi Mrs.sharma ne phone uthaya….. “hello” …… aashish thoda hichkichaya kyonki usey pata tha ki ye shaweta ki mummy ki aawaz hai…. “hello, namastey aunty ji… hum aashish bol rahe hai..”  

 

Before that she could relate with the story more, again a song came according to the situation and she lost more in the song…. Did he also think for call me or he never felt like? Oh god please help me… I want to hear his voice, know about his life style, something about him which he knows only, which he’ll tell me only…. Which he share with me only…..  just then her thoughts broke down when he cell buzzed flashing the name of her best friends Aashima….

 

He lower down the voice of Fm and picked up her call….. “hey aashi…” she spoke over the phone and she heard her chirpy voice…… “hiiii geetu… kaisi hai tu?” she asked from here….. “oye, tera trip kaisa tha tere fiancé ke sath?” asked geet……. “it was amazing yaar… you know we both went to Crystal world , kempty fall and both had lunch and dinner together…. It was so much fun and romance full you know…” aashima teased her and told her everything which geet wants to listen specially…….

 

Geet felt little bit sad cause she got maan’s call only once that too for some minutes…. But she can’t compare her relation with aashima……  aashima’s fiancé is jovial, funny and here Maan is serious types, stern, like gentle man wala attitude…..  but somewhere she is happy with maan cause she doesn’t know much about him where aashi her friend knew everything about him….. then there will not much curiosity is finding things about your partner after marriage when you know everything about them…..

 

She talked with her some more  time then her friend asked from her….. “yaar geet, you like Maan na?” geet confused that why she is asking such question…. “haan aashi but what made you ask this question suddenly?” asked geet….  “it’s just strike my mind that’s y….. it’s arrange marriage na and you don’t know much about him….” She replied back to geet…

 

no yaar, nothing is like that….. I know it’s arrange marriage but believe me yaar I am happy being with him…. Haan right now mujhe jayada kuch nahi pata but trust me yaar…. Slowly-2 I’ll get to know everything about him , kya pata woh bhi isi kashmakash mein ho…he doesn’t know anything about me…. But yaar, jo maza slowly-2 ek dusre ke bare me janne mein hai wo kahi nahi…. I mean, aapko unki likes and dislikes ka pata hai but what about their little-2 secrets which none knows…. I’ll be surely happy with him…. I can tell from now only….” Geet finished herself ……

 

 “stop praising girl…. Itna hi achha hai to mujhse milwa na..” aashi spoke …… “kyon? Tu apne wale ke sath khush reh…. Don’t eye on mine..” she said to her showing finger like she is able to see her finger…..  “achha aashi bata na, when he called you then what type of talk you both had? I mean just want to know…” geet couldn’t control on herself from asking….. she wants to know everything….. what type of talks she can do with maan? Will he like it or not? Etc etc …..

 

kyon batau…. Discover by urself…” she replied back…… “you are very bad..” she said her and about to cut the call….. “achha baba….sorry….. sun, ummm haan,,, first talk about your likes, ask his.. I mean what type color he likes, actor, actress, about tv, and then tried to ask personal things….. I mean about he do from morning to night… what type of perfume he likes, and..” ……………

 

but geet stopped her in mid…… “bas…bas…. Itna sab…. I can’t talk with him properly over the phone..i can’t ask… I’ll discover after marriage…… chal bye…” she said bye before she could say something to her , cause geet knew that she will ask something and she won’t be able to give her reason…..  Geet wants to know him like he wants to know her…..  without asking, just got it by their acts….

 

 

@sampa-where r u? again lost kya?

@tia- haaye sweety, loved ur comment….. surely u’ll meet to ur soulmate soon….. don’t worry,…..

 

@pihu- thank u dear for the lovely comment….. yaar, that thread has been deleted, and that is not on facebook also…. and by mistake, my whole data has been deleted that is saved in my pendrive…. so i can’t give u those parts…. sorry dear….

@poo- haaye dear…. I was waiting for ur comment but didn’t expected at this time…. Loved ur comment…thank u so much yaar for loving the story and even sharing something about the arrange marriage…… arey this Milai system is very bad in North side….

@kiran di- loved ur comment at previous update…. I had replied u there…just check it…

@humera- loved ur comment…thanks dear…..

Thank u so much to all of you who commented here and IF too….  Loved ur comments… Thank u so much for relating this story with ur real life and even dreaming about ur life partner too….. i am very happy for this….. i am sure you’ll get ur life partner soon and i hope he’ll be just like maan……… pls try to comment more than awesome & lovely part….. pls it’s a request….

 

Love ya

Neha

~Drown in Love~ pt-19

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~Drown in Love~

part-19

 

haan, kaam toh bahut hota hai par my family never suffer because of my work..” he said , he doesn’t want that she felt bad because he has so much work…….

 

But suddenly line went off…… she looked at her cell….. cut gaya….. she made a sad face and he also looked at his phone…. Oh god.. battery down…. ..he at once put his phone on charged and tried to switch on his phone while she also stare at her phone, expecting his call again….  “till now, I didn’t get you call, it was okay but now I got it, and now I am expecting again… geet , hold on girl… what happen to you? ” she talked to herself……

 

Maan, get a grip on you man!…. he said to himself when he panicked at once when the call went off…..  he became very restless, he doesn’t know for what this restlessness? For not talking with her, for cutting the call or what she is thinking about him?  He is getting a new feeling inside his heart, something is flipping inside his heart, a roller coaster feeling…..

 

Till now he switched on his cell and opened the message box…… he is in dilemma that should I msg her or not? If I am sending msg then what I’ll type in that message? He flipped the cell in his hand but alas he failed in that cause of charging wire…. He sighed ….. he saved her number as Mrs.Maan Khurana  casually…. Actually in his thinking session, he didn’t get with what name he is saving her name…… and then opened the message box again and typed “sorry geet..” and finally he pressed send button…..

 

Her cell buzzed and she at once jumped on her cell leaving her all the clothes from her hands……. “Maan ka msg…. kya likha hoga?” she murmured and at once opened ,….  But he could call me na…. she thought in her mind…… lekin geet you won’t be able to speak a word to him, you see na what happened just now… you went just silent like you are a dumb…. Theek hi kiya….. she replied back herself in her mind……. Her all curiosity went in vain when she read sorry geet…… sorry for what? She asked to herself……  she replied him “sorry for what?”

 

He got her reply…… he didn’t realize that he was waiting for her reply so impatiently….. he didn’t touch his laptop and was staring at the cell……  “because low battery, call cut ho gaya tha…” he replied and she smiled getting his reply back…..  “but there is no fault of yours then why are you saying sorry….  ”  she replied back , , his cell beeped , his lips curved in smile….. yes there is no fault of his, but he didn’t know why he said sorry…..

 

Both didn’t realize, it’s been half an hour they are talking with each other, ,  but soon realization sunk down in their mind when he heard a mail sound from his laptop and he got it it’s been half an hour….. he never chat with anyone by message…. It was his first time that too with his fiancée…..  “umm, geet… sorry but now I have to go…. I have to prepare a very important presentation..” he finally send but hoping that she won’t feel bad…… ..

 

presentation??? But you are CBI officer…” she asked from him by msg….. he smiled knowing that she doesn’t know about his business…. She thinks that he is only a CBI officer…… “Geet, , I handle my father’s business too and I am not a permanent officer, ” he replied back…..  she was shocked getting that he has his business and not a permanent officer….. “but no one told me about your work… they told you are in police..” she told him and he smiled feeling that she is complaining to him…. 

 

After some seconds,, her cell buzzed again with a message tone and she at once looked at the screen…..”geet, was that complain?” he asked… he couldn’t control himself from asking….. “haan…even you didn’t tell me about your profession…” she replied back…….  He smiled more reading her message filled complaints……  but he also has the right to complaint….. “but you didn’t ask about my profession…that’s y I didn’t tell you….” He replied to her…..

 

 

She felt good when he shared something about his work….  He has to prepare a presentation…. “ ok maan…. Work is needed….… you are getting late for your presentation and do ur work..” she replied back and he felt calm knowing that she understands him….. ..  “thank you” he replied with a smiley and she replied back only a smiley…. Like this their conversation ends…..

 

Finishing her chat with maan, she fell back on the bed hiding her face in the pillow, a shy smile crept of her face, , she felt very good after talking with him….. he is not like those cruel police officers…. He is pretty understandable….  She bit her lip consciously , the feel of his voice when she heard on the phone…. Though she had talked with him face to face but now their relation changed….. that time they talked first time, she didn’t know about him….  

 

geet, , you are a big jhalli….. you didn’t ask about his profession….. ” she thought for a second..”but geet….tuney toh kuch bhi nahi puchha..” she replied to herself…… “waise, yahi sahi hai…. At least, I’ll get to know some things about him whenever I’ll talk with him…” she assured herself and again hid her face in the pillow feeling shy from herself…..

 

On the other hand maan , for some seconds he stared at his cell, , he didn’t believe that he talked with geet , first on call and then by message….  He smiled and get back to his work…. While outside of his room Vicky still stood there….. “Vicky chal na… ab kuch awaaz nahi aa rahi..” annie told to Vicky…. They were hearing maan’s voice but not properly…. They knew that he is talking with geet but what? They don’t know……

 

Vicky turned and fell on the floor tired fully….. annie looked at him trying to drag him from there but he didn’t budge from his place….. “hippo, kitna khata hai… hilta hi nahi… chal yaha se..” she told him….. “haan jaise kit u to slim trim stick hai… jaise ki hawa ka jhonka aayega aur tujhe udaa le jayega” he replied her back , finally stood , went in his room and direct fell on the bed , feeling sleepy now….

 

 

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~Drown in Love~ pt-18

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~Drown in Love~

 

part-18

 

 

Thinking about his life, about this whole week that is passed away like this but he became irritated with the continuous teasing by his family……   his lips curved in a smile when he got her call…. Well it was not hers fault….. it was the naughtiness of Vicky……  first he was shocked when he heard her voice and got to know that that’s geet’s voice…..  he closed his eyes and went back in flashback…….

 

Flashback….

 

He was making a presentation in his laptop sitting comfortably on his bed in his room…… well none is there for disturbing him, as he said don’t disturb me…. This presentation is very needed and later he has to look in a case, , but there is one person who won’t listen anything that is his younger brother Vicky…..

 

Vicky and annie , both were standing outside of his room , trying to get a way to enter in his room but how? “Vicky….. do something na…” annie chided at him……  “I am thinking na…. don’t disturb me..” he whispered back….. “lekin kab….? Aise to bhai ki bhabhi se baat bhul jao…” annie spoke being very sad, , she sat on a couch , held her face in her palms , resting her elbows on her knees and looked at Vicky who was roaming left to right…right to left…..

 

stop doing left right….okay…” annie said frustrated because of his left right….. “we want to enter in maan bhai’s room not any border….. so stop doing this left and right…” she said again…… “maan bhai ke room mein jana kisi border par jaane se less nahi hai… samjhi u fool..” Vicky replied in back…… she shrugged off his taunt and thought……

 

you wait here…. Coming in a min…” he said and marched towards maan’s room……  “kaha ja raha hai?” she asked in little louder voice…. Where he immediately turned behind putting index finger on his lip saying her keep silent….. she nodded and he knocked maan’s room…..  “Bhaiiiii…..” Vicky said putting his ear on the gate…….

 

yes vicky….. ” maan replied from inside…… “can I come in?” he asked in his sweetest voice….. maan looked at the laptop and then at gate….. now what he wants? He thought in his mind…. He already said don’t disturb me but no…. Vicky never listen him…. See this time also came here to disturb me….  He sighed and spoke….. “come in..” hearing his permission, Vicky did  a small bhangra in his mind then entered inside the room…..

 

why u disturb me Vicky?” maan asked , , “bhai… why u always say don’t disturb me… when u’ll get marry then if you’ll say don’t disturb me then we’ll take out different meaning so stop putting do not disturb tag on the handle…” he suggested in his coolest way taking a place on the couch……….. hearing him, maan’s eyes shot opened and he knew what kind of meaning he is talking about……

 

Maan pressed his lips tightly, actually gritted teeth little bit, , how dare he tease me in this way but soon those types of images start coming in his mind, , he shook his head at once and glared at Vicky, , “why u came here?” he asked, he asked simple question cause he didn’t want to waste his time strangling with him now.. and Vicky jumped on his bed…..

 

bhai, please give me your cell…” he asked and the question at once threw on him by maan…. “why?

 

actually bhai, my cell’s fell down in water now it is not working properly ” he replied back….. “you can take annie’s cell..” said maan….. “she is not giving me… she is busy in chatting with her friends..” he replied back…… “take mom’s or dadi’s cell..” maan suggested typing some lines in his presentation……

 

bhai,. I have already asked from them….. mom is not at home…. And dadi…. She is busy in listening her fav old songs and playing angry bird ” he said shaking his head…… “bhai please, give me na…. it’s related to your marriage… dad told me to contact a wedding planner and he gave me number, that is saved in my sim…” he literally begged and maan finally gave him his phone…… “thank u bhai…. ” he at once disappeared from there, ,

 

As soon as he came out from his room, he showed maan’s phone to annie and she jumped, ran towards him…..  “you got it..” she asked and he nodded pulling her towards his room….  “chal ab jaldi kaam start kar..” he told her and she nodded again…..

 

Annie called to ridzy by her cell and told her that she will give 2-3 miss calls by maan’s cell on geet’s number and then you will say to geet for call back on the number…..  ridzy was also set for this, as she also wants her di will get a chance to talk with maan…..

 

It’s nothing bad in this……  Ridzy was having Geet’s cell in her hand and talking with annie, , while annie also doing the same but she is having maan’s cell in her hand…..   annie called 2-3 times and ridzy got 2-3 miss calls on geet’s cell , now it’s her chance to trap geet……

 

finally done…now vicky go….. give bhai’s cell back… nahi to investigation start ho jayega..” she spoke and both giggled…. And somewhere both had a little fear in the corner of their heart for being caught……

 

In Dehradun…..

 

Geet was busy arranging her cupboard , ridzy peeped inside and saw her….. “wow… mood is good… chal lag ja kaam par..” ridzy spoke in her mind and entered showing some hurry….. “di, 2 miss calls on your phone…. ” she said giving her cell…. “kiski hai?” asked geet seeing number in cell…. “I don’t know… it doesn’t showing the name… seems new number… ” she replied back…… “okay… jiska hoga call back karega…” said geet keeping her phone on bed…………

 

Ridzy shocked……she at once took her cell in her hand….. “no di.. you should call back and ask who is this?” said ridzy…… “why should I call?” asked geet still busy keeping her clothes in cupboard….. “once, it happened with me too…. I also thought the same but when I called back, I got it was my friend, who changed her number…. And waise bhi, aapki wo jo friend hai na Aashi, she is not here , may be she called you” ridzy hopped that geet di, please convince na….  geet looked at her , thinking for a while…. “okay…” she said taking her cell back……..

 

Giving her cell back, she at once flew away from her room while on the other side Vicky also flew away from maan’s room giving him his cell back….. but he kept his ear on the gate….. geet slide the number and make a call , , his cell buzzed breaking his concentration from his work…..

 

Maan looked at his cell screen, it’s showing new number…… who is calling me ? new number…. He said to himself…..  geet’s patience was giving up as none picked the phone, , as soon as she was about the cut the call, he picked it….

 

Hello..!” he answered the call, , “hello, , who is this?” she asked at once hearing a male voice…. She again looked at the number….. “ex-cuse me… you called me.. you should know to whom you are calling…” he replied back…… “wait a second… I got miss call from this number…. Can u pls tell me who r u?” she said again….. his mind at once worked up and vicky’s imaged flashed in his mind….  He made a face….. “It’s Maan Singh Khurana” he said his name proudly but on the other hand, ,

 

Voice stuck in her throat hearing his name….. Maan….. Ma….an… called me….. her mind is buzzing with these lines……  “hello…”….. no response from her side…. She doesn’t know what to reply…. She talked with him little rudely cause he was not telling his name….. “hello…. Answer me.. who is there?” 

 

Geet, di… ho gayi baat..?” ridzy screamed as much loud she can so that maan can hear her voice…..  geet was in a trance didn’t realize that maan got it who is there…… he heard ridzy’s screaming voice and at once “geet” name slipped from his mouth…….. “haan..ji..” she replied at once….

 

Maan smiled getting the response from her side…. He got it why she was not responding him back…..  “hi..” he said keeping his laptop aside…. Well how can he work now when he is talking to his would be wife…. Now work has to wait……

 

hello..” she replied back , her heart was beating so faster than it’s usual pace, , her hands were sweating even she could feel the heat coming out from her ears, , on the other hand, maan’s condition was also not less than……  his heart was also beating so fast, , he could imagine heart’s beating speed is more than 100 times in a second….  He doesn’t know what to say further…..

 

I didn’t call you….” He said, , and hearing that her heart felt bad at once, that means he didn’t want to talk with me but soon he corrected himself when he realized what he said…. “I mean, I want to but busy, Vicky took my cell and he called you..” he doesn’t know what he is saying, , even he didn’t realized what happiness he gave to geet saying that “I want to but busy” she has not any problem with his busy schedule , at least he wants to talk with me… that’s enough for her…. “it’s okay” she replied back and he sighed in relief……

 

okay..” he said……  sirf okay…. Doesn’t he wants to talk to you geet? She asked herself in her mind……  “kaisi ho?” he asked absentmindedly, ,he doesn’t how those words slipped from his mouth…… “ , theek hu… aur aap?” she asked shyly putting her previous thoughts aside….. “mai bhi…. Wo actually office mein bahut kaam tha isliye..”  but before he complete himself, she interrupt him in between….. “I can understand… aapko bahut kaam hota hoga na..” she replied……

 

haan, kaam toh bahut hota hai par my family never suffer because of my work..” he said , he doesn’t want that she felt bad because he has so much work…….

 

But suddenly line went off…… she looked at her cell….. cut gaya….. she made a sad face and he also looked at his phone…. Oh god.. battery down…. ..he at once put his phone on charged and tried to switch on his phone while she also stare at her phone, expecting his call again….  “till now, I didn’t get you call, it was okay but now I got it, and now I am expecting again… geet , hold on girl… what happen to you? ” she talked to herself…..

 

 

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~Drown in Love~ pt-17

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~Drown in Love~

 

Wishing to all of you a very Happy Eid and Teej…

part-17

After some time, , the lunch cum dinner has been set on the dinning table and everyone headed towards the dinning table……  Vicky wanted to made geet sit with maan but he was failed and geet sat at the other side……   the food was so yummy, , 4 types of vegetables, , fruity curd, salad, puri, kheer,……

 

everyone licked their fingers and spoons, this much tasty the food was….. even maan also praised the food and everyone sighed in relief that he’ll be happy with geet……

 

After the dinner, , it’s time for their departure, , everyone is sitting in the hall and chatting with each other…. Where the geet and maan are the one who were sitting quietly, not talking with anyone, just hearing others talks and getting teased by others…..

 

geet was sitting in the mid of maan’s family and talking with her while she was just answering to them and maan, sometimes  look in his cell, sometimes replied to geet’s father……..

 

achha mohinder ji…. Ab chaltey hai…” said maan’s father , , “arey nahi, param ji…. Aise kaise itni jaldi….. meetha toh aapne khaya hi nahi…” he said signaling to rano  for bring Moong Dal halwa…. “nahi, nahi…. Itna sab khilaa diya…. Ab aur nahi….” Param tried to deny but mohinder didn’t listen…..

 

ha ha, behen ji…. Ab to stomach full ho gaya…” said maan’s mother where maan and geet tried to look at each other listening their talks in between…….  “aise kaise full ho gaya….. ye toh aap sabko khana hi padega…… Aapki hone wali Bahu ne jo banaya hai….” Said rano chirpily and everyone looked at geet where she looked down shyly…….

 

achha ji… aisi baat hai…. Mai to jarur khaunga….” Raj said rubbing his hands together , adjusting himself on the couch comfortably…….  “ha ha…. Aap to lenge hi….. Geet, mai pehle hi bata rahi hu….. Raj and Maan, , yeh dono agar sath baith jaaye to sweets ka full bowl finish kar denge…” Simmi said looking at maan and raj…… where maan became embarrassed……. “Simmi di…aap…” maan tried to say something, Geet smiled hearing something about him….. so he is very fond of sweets…..

 

“tab toh, , Jodi khoob jamegi hamari di and jiju ki…. Because, my Geet di is expert in sweets….. she knows every kind of sweet dish and those dishes are mouth watering….” Ridzy replied hugging geet from behind……

 

geet, , aap inki baato ko seriously mat lena…. ” said maan’s mother…… she doesn’t want that geet get scared because of their naughtiness……

 

Geet, , I am saying this…. Whenever I’ll come at home na then please don’t take any extra efforts… just prepare full bowl of sweets for me…. That’ll be enough for me…” Raj said and all laughed ….. “ji, jija ji…” geet replied looking at him…… “haaye… jija jib hi kitna meetha-2 sound kar raha hai…” Raj said dreaming about the sweet dishes…… “kuch toh sharam karo..” Simmi said smacking his shoulder in front of everyone……..

 

arey shrimati ji…. Ab geet se toh hamara Mazzak ka rishta hai… itna haq toh banta hai…. Kyon geet?” he asked straight from geet…… she doesn’t know what to reply… she just nodded and till then Rano and Sonia came there, with two trays, full of bowl with Moong Dal halwa…… and they served to everyone…..

 

waah geet….. halwa ho toh aisa ho warna na ho..” Raj praised and pushed another spoon in his mouth full of halwa, , she said thank you…… she looked at maan and maan looked at her…. It was a eye lock of some seconds but she got it what he wanted to tell her…..

 

he loved the halwa made by her, , she got it when he looked at halwa and then at her, a sweet smile played on his lips, and his eyes shined ….. she also smiled in return , and he got it, she understood his praising……

 

After sometime, everyone standing at the gate for going back to their home….. just then Annie sneaked out from there and pulled geet from them, , everyone smiled knowing that may be she wants to talk with her, after geet is going to be her bhabhi……

 

bhabhi..come fast…” annie said to her,,,,, “anwesha didi… kya hua?” geet asked…….. annie looked at geet shocked…..  “bhabhi..please….. there is no need to call me as di… call me annie..” she said to her…. “but…. If anyone will say something then….” Asked geet…. She knew that, at our in-laws house, we have to call di of husband’s sister whether the sister is younger or  elder…….

 

chill bhabhi,….. there is no rule in our house….. call me with my name freely….. and yes feel free to ask anything about bhai…. Mai kisi ko kuch nahi bataungi…” annie whispered in geet’s ear and geet nodded shyly…..  “okay annie…” geet replied back…… “yeh huyi na annie ki bhabhi wali baat..” saying so she winked at her and both laughed……

 

“achha bhabhi….. give me ur number…. Who actually…. I know bhai will never ask so I thought I’ll accomplish this task…” she said winking at her again…… Annie can see the dreamy look in her eyes for maan and she became very happy cause Geet is perfect for her Bhai……  geet said her number to her and both went back…….  But geet remain inside the house…… everyone went back to Delhi making Geet theirs…..

 

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He was standing at his window and looking again at the sky….. it was dark, , no sign of any star, dark clouds, like it is about to rain heavily……  A strong gush of wind passed through the window and went away from the gate of his room, , and it sends chills to his spines….. standing there in vest n tracks , late night and deep thinking, ……

 

Thinking about his life, about this whole week that is passed away like this but he became irritated with the continuous teasing by his family……   his lips curved in a smile when he got her call…. Well it was not hers fault….. it was the naughtiness of Vicky……  first he was shocked when he heard her voice and got to know that that’s geet’s voice…..  he closed his eyes and went back in flashback…….

 

 

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~Drown in Love~ pt-16

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 ~Drown in Love~

part-16

 

mami…” he screamed when he just put his feet inside the hall and all the head turned towards him… he went inside and stood infront of geet again called her….. “mami..”…. “hello..” geet replied giving him her dazzling smile….. “aap mamu se shaadi karoge?” he asked innocently and geet blushed hearing his simple question while maan stood rooted at his place…….

 

All the persons who were present there were so amused by Ansh’s question…. They were thinking who had to feed this question in his little mind…… now they are eager to get response from geet…. What she’ll reply him…… ?  Geet was looking down cause she can’t meet her eyes with everyone,  she knew that all have teasing tinge in their eyes…… but maan was also eager to hear her response……

 

His reverie broke down when Vicky pushed him inside , , “kya bhai….. why are you standing here? Come inside na…. none will stop you…” he teased him and maan glared him…….. just then Ridzy spoke in defense of geet…….. “Ansh……. Ab aapke Mamu ne kaha….. shaadi karunga to bas geet se karunga….. ab unhe itni pasand hai to inko toh aapke mamu se shaadi karni padegi na…”……..  all were smiling at her reply and the environment became so sweet and naughty……

 

toh shaadi ke baad mami mamu ke sath unke room mein rahengi?” he asked again and all laughed at his question…..where Maan and Geet stealing glances with  each other, feeling very shy to even look at any face from the present ones……embarrassed in front of all, blushing but maan tried to maintain stern face..

 

Ansh….. come here…badmaash” Maan called him , , he pulled him and grabbed him between his legs, , stopping him….. “beta, no more questions now….. nahi to mamma gussa karegi..” he told him and he jumped in his lap making himself comfortable…….

 

lijiye, pandit ji bhi aa gaye….” Ridzy spoke when pandit ji entered in the hall….. “namastey pandit ji..” geet’s father spoke ,,,,,  “baithiye..” he told and pandit ji took his seat…..  “pandit ji…. Bacho ki kundli dekhkar batayiye kitne gun miltey hai?” told dadi taking out Maan’s kundli from the bag…..  while ridzy also brought Geet’s kundli and hand over to pandit ji…..

 

He took both the kundli and started his calculations on a blank paper, doing some calculation on his fingers, , matching their stars and other things….. after some time he reached to the conclusion and all eyes were stuck on him, …. “bahut hi achhi kundli hai dono ki… aur Jodi bhi khoob jamegi…. ” he spoke…..

 

pandit ji, aap batayiye na… 36 ke 36 gun milte hai na..” Vicky asked….. “nahi beta….. 36 toh nahi…. Lekin 33 jarur miltey hai…. Aur yeh to bahut hi achha hai…. ” all became happy hearing this and started congratulating each other…… and maan & geet looked each other for a brief second…

 

Just then Rano came along with Sonia , , where Maan’s mother and dadi also prepared all the things that is needed for Roka…..  “Geet, beta… come here and,,, sit with maan…” dadi told her, geet nodded and ridzy made her sit near maan on the couch , ,  Sonia came forwardand covered her head with her dupatta and stood beside her so that she won’t feel nervous…..

 

Maan’s mother come forward holding a thaal in her hand….. she put a tilak on maan’s forehead and then put some rice above the tilak , , then she put kumkum tilak on geet’s forehead …. Then she gave one envelope to geet that is filled from money, and then she made her wear a gold chain along with a beautiful pendant in the chain, , then she fed some sweets to maan and to geet…..  Maan and Geet both bend down and took blessings from maan’s mother……

 

 

Then dadi came and did the same thing , , now simmi’s turn…. “wow.. both are looking so cute…” but she stopped when maan glared at her at the word cute….. she bit her lip…. “so adorable… perfect couple..” she corrected her mistake and maan’s lips curved in small smile where geet blushed…..  on the other hand Vicky became a photographer…. Clicking every single picture of their expressions….

 

Maan’s father come forward and give envelope to geet and then both bend down for taking his blessings, he put his hands on their head and blessed them….. this time Raj come forward and blessed them…..  fed them sweets, ,

 

Now Rano come forward along with mohinder , , she put the tilak on Maan’s forehead, then applied some rice, , she gave money filled envelope along with a Nariyal(dry coconut) , , money is around 5100 Rs… that is the ritual… we have to stop the boy by the money around 1100, 5100 and if we want more then we can spend more like 10,000…. Or so,…..  she fed them sweets, both bend down and took their blessings….  

 

Sonia come and did the same thing but she didn’t give him this much money…. .. Geet’s parents gave them 11 boxes of sweets….  Because maan’s family brought 7 boxes of sweets, , that’s y girl’s side family has to increase the no. of things…..  and mohinder give them 2 baskets of fruits cause they brought 1 basket of fruits…..

 

It’s time for Milai…… in simple words we have to respect boy’s side family with money…..  when boy’s parents and girl’s parents meet with each other, that time girl’s parents has to give them money… that is called Milai…..

 

When mohinder come forward with envelopes and he gave first one to Param..maan’s father…….  “arey, mohinder ji…. Yeh sab… iski koi jarurat nahi hai…” “lekin, param ji, yeh to riwaaz hai..” mohinder said…. “ha ha… hum jaante hia riwaaz hai lekin aapne ladke ko rokna tha, humne ladki ko rokna tha, to rok liya… ab iski kya jarurat hai….  ” Param replied ….

 

Just then dadi spoke….. “param, bilkul sahi keh raha hai……. Ladka, ladki ko rokna kar liya…. Bas ab aur kuch nahi…. Ab to aap bas pandit ji ko bulwa lijiye,…” dadi said with a huge smile on her face while maan and geet sit beside of each other surrounded by family members……

 

 Pandit ji came again and took his seat…….  “pandit ji,,,, ab ek achha sa shubh muhurat bhi nikal dijiye…” told dadi taking out again maan’s kundali… where mohinder handed geet’s kundali…..  pandit ji started again his calculations and reached to the conclusion……   “2 months ke baad ka bahut hi achha shubh muhurat hai….. isse achha din to koi ho hi nahi sakta…… ”

 

Hearing that everyone jumped in joy and excitement, , ridzy served sweets to everyone but first she fed the sweet to her geet di and her would be jiju where shyly he took little piece of sweet, , he was hell nervous before that but hearing that after one month he’ll get married, his heart skipped several beats, , something is fluttering in his stomach, he never felt like this before, this kind of feeling, , that’s y he hate this kind of rituals, this whole marriage thing, , how will he survive between all these things ? how he’ll he manage all the things?

 

A little smile on his face in front of all but so many questions ringing in his mind, , who’ll give the answers of his questions……   I’ll talk to Armaan…. He thought in his mind…. Yeah, he understood him like none can understand him…… they are the bestest buddy from childhood…… he was the only one who understood his silence, , what he needed in school? What he is thinking? Every small thing, , Maan’s family treats Armaan like their own son because of this deep friendship……

 

On the other hand , geet’s cheeks were crimson red…. She doesn’t know how can any person feel like this for other person in mere some minutes or in some hours….? A face whom she never saw before , she never met before, how can she have this jittery feeling in her stomach for this person? A person who is going to be her life partner, how can she blush with the mere mention of his name? how can her heart jumped getting teased taking his name?

 

she is shivering like hell, , is he also feeling the same? She asked from her herself and she tried to steal a glance of his face , , she at once looked down in her lap when her eyes met with his, suddenly he turned his face and their eyes locked for a mere second……. His lips curved in a smile knowing the state of her mind…….

 

Their thoughts broke down with the voice of mohinder……. “rano ji, , khana lagao ji…. ” he told….. “haan ji…. Ridzy, Sonia… come…” she replied back and called them for helping her……  they all went in kitchen while in the hall, , gents were busy in their talks while ladies made geet sit between of them and chatting with her…..  usual talks, ,  and geet was simply nodding or replying only….. nothing much as she don’t what to talk with them now…….

 

After some time, , the lunch cum dinner has been set on the dinning table and everyone headed towards the dinning table……  Vicky wanted to made geet sit with maan but he was failed and geet sat at the other side……   the food was so yummy, , 4 types of vegetables, , fruity curd, salad, puri, kheer,…… everyone licked their fingers and spoons, this much tasty the food was….. even maan also praised the food and everyone sighed in relief that he’ll be happy with geet……

 

In our society….. peoples are very hungry for money…. like they are getting their son married just for money…… I really hate this…… even this things happened in my sis’s marriage too….. they want money as a Milai for their relatives…… this society will never change…..

sorry friends….. updates are getting late but what to do…. still down with fever, sneezing badly, headache …… i had holidays from 2 to 6, i thought I’ll give regular updates but see, , i became late…… very sorry sweetis..…… pls-2 do comments….. comments are getting less…

 

@sampa-missing u yaar..

@cherish- where r u? sorry for not commenting on urs…. not coming ol properly….

 

~Drown in Love~ pt-15

~Drown in Love~

part-15

“so…?” asked Sonia…. “so???” asked Simmi…. Geet blushed hiding her face in her palm and hugged her bhabhi at once…… while Maan smiled a little and simmi jumped , , hugged him tight , , leaving him behind she ran inside leaving Maan and Raj behind…… both gave each other a manly hug, , “congrats saale sahib….” Raj spoke patted his back …… and maan smiled……

“Tau ji…. Yes… yes… yes….” She told chirpily while entering in hall…. “dadi maa…. Maan said yes… ” she told to dadi and everyone jumped in excitement…….. “papa, , mummy… it’s yes…” replied Ridzy who overheard the convo between Geet and Sonia…

“sach mein??” asked dadi, who was unable to believe that maan said yes…… it felt like a dream come true…… “ji haan dadi maa…… maan said yes…” replied simmi taking place beside her tayi ji…… “maa ji, , I am very happy today…” told maan’s mother and they heard both Man hugging each other……

“Badhayi ho Param ji…” said geet’s father hugging him, ,patting his back while the same response he get from Param…. “aapko bhi bahut-2 badhayi ho….” He said…. Both parted away , a smile of happiness, like they found what they desired…… “I can’t believe…. It was a dream…” said maan’s father looking at his mother who nodded through tears…… a wet smile playing on her lips…..

They found Maan’s mother taking out the jewel which she brought from home for geet…… …………….. “Geet….. tu khush to hai na?” asked Sonia…… geet blushed and nodding still looking down……. “meri aankho mein dekhkar bol” she said again…. She wants to see happiness in her eyes….. she doesn’t want that she get agree because everyone wants her to get marry with maan…… if she is okay with it then everyone will be okay and if she doesn’t want this alliance then she’ll support her…….

“bhabhi…. Relax…. Chill….. I am happy….. I found him like papa…. ” Sonia looked at her curiously….. she wants to listen what she thinks about him…….. “bhabhi….. I mean… he talk just like papa , so sincere but one things more I like about him…”

“and what is that my sweet nand ji?” Sonia asked teasingly……. “wo….wo…. ” before she complete, ridzy jumped in between of their conversation……

“yahi ki, he is so…so handsome….. hai na di…” saying so she pulled geet in a very tight hug choking her and then screamed in her ear……“congratssssssssssss di….” Geet smiled and hugged her back while Sonia took both in her embrace congratulating her…… while inside the hall……

“maa ji… ab rasam bhi karle?” asked maan’s mother to dadi…. “haan , Rajni…. Mai baat karti hu…” replied dadi…. And then she turned towards rano……

“Rano ji…. Ab sab raazi hai to kyo nahi ek chhoti sa Rokna kar le..” suggested dadi to rano…. And rano beamed with happiness…… “ji maa ji…. Kyo nahi… ” replied rano and then she went to mohinder for talking with him…….. “suniye ji ek min…” she called him when he was talking with maan’s father……. “ek min mein aaya…” mohinder said to param and excused himself……… “ji, rano ji…” said mohinder……

“wo log roka karne ke liye keh rahe hai…. To zara wo shagun ke envelopes fill kar dete…” told rano and he nodded…… he went upside …………. “geet…. Beta…. Yahi rehne ka iraada hai kya…? Chalo andar teeno..” rano said coming towards them….

She came and stand beside of her, caressing her head lovingly…… “meri bachchi…. Tu khush toh hai na?” she asked in her motherly way cupping her cheek…… geet nodded and smiled through her tears ……

“mummy ji… don’t worry… I have already talked about that with her…” told Sonia…. And rano caressed her head to blessing her….. she felt very happy getting a daughter in law like Sonia…. “achha…. Chalo andar jaldi….. ” said rano dragging them inside….. “ridhi puttar….. you go inside with geet and sit with them…. Sonia, beta. You come with me and help me..” rano said…….

Geet and ridzy follow her mother’s orders….. they entered inside the hall…… “geet, beta…. Yaha aakar baitho..” said maan’s mother……. And geet sit there looking down…… “beta, aap khush toh hai na iss rishtey se?” this time maan’s mother asked but she’ll give the same reply third time….. “ji..” she replied while nodding and smiled at her…… “hamesha khush raho beta…” she blessed geet caressing her head…..

While inside the house, , in the kitchen….. “beta, , ek thaal mein, kumkum, , chawal(rice), sweets rakhle…” rano guided her and Sonia put all the things in a plate while she arranged other things like envelopes for each person as a shagun(umm in our language it’s Milai..)……. While outside in the backyard, maan, Vicky, raj and ansh…. 2 from them teasing him like how he said yes…..

Suddenly Vicky spoke…. “ansh…. Beta…. Aapko pata hai hamare ghar mein na ek new member aane wala hai” he said looking at Vicky and poor boy ansh got confused…… maan looked at Vicky threatening him with his eyes but Vicky hide his face in ansh whispering something and Raj was having fun watching all this……

“who is coming chhote mamu…?” he asked nibbling his chocolate…. “wo girl jo andar red dress mein hai na…woh…” Vicky replied him back…… “kyo chhote mamu? unka apna ghar nahi hai?” he asked again….. “ unke paas apna ghar toh hai but your bade mamu will marry with her…” he replied back……. Poor boy still confused…..

“aur aapko pata hai, , wo girl na aapke bade mamu ke room mein rahegi..” he said giving a naughty smirk to maan and maan glared him back…… this is the reason for not accepting any proposal…. He knew that if he said yes then everyone will tease him like hell and now the same is happening with him…. He doesn’t know why people have the tendency to tease others…..? can’t they keep silent….?

“ansh… beta..come here…” maan called him and ansh get down from vicky’s lap and went to maan, sat in his lap…… “beta, you know na, your chhote mamu always say rubbish things… isliye don’t believe him….” Maan said him and ansh nodded obeying him but he asked one thing…..

“wo red dress wali kaun hai?” he asked innocently….. though maan told him not to respond Vicky but still the way everyone is around that red dress wali girl and now his chhote mamu also talking about her…… some thing striked his little mind……

“ha ha, Maan, tell him, who is that red dress wali girl..” Raj pushed him giving him a sly smile , maan gritted his teeth whispering jiju and raj smirked…. Now, bachke kaha jaoge maan babu… he thought in his mind…. “beta, , wo girl na aapki hone wali mami hai… ” replied maan…..

“sach mamu… fir wo bhi hamare sath rahegi..?” he asked….. maan nodded and ansh jumped from his lap, ran inside the house calling her mami….mami….mami… and all the men ran behind him…..

“mami…” he screamed when he just put his feet inside the hall and all the head turned towards him… he went inside and stood infront of geet again called her….. “mami..”…. “hello..” geet replied giving him her dazzling smile….. “aap mamu se shaadi karoge?” he asked innocently and geet blushed hearing his simple question while maan stood rooted at his place…….

Sorry frnds for being super late…….. didn’t give according to precap, that’s y I hate to give precap….. next part hopefully tomorrow……

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