~Drown in Love~ pt-10


 ~Drown in Love~

part-10

 

He took out his cell and called to someone….. “come at this XYZ road, here will be a car no. ******** ,  get it fix soon”, , saying so he hung up the call and she gaped at him with her open mouth…… how can anyone help this of stranger?  He felt nervous because of gaping at him like this……

 

he never feel like this ever in his life…… even not in his college life when girls used to gaped at him, , but here is a difference…… he knew that she is going to be his life partner……. He knew now what relation he’ll have with her…..

 

Still her body touch is lingering on his, , the every cell of her body radiating in him……. He can feel his skin is burning still because it was the first he felt any girl from so close……  he chuckled when she was gaping at him with her open mouth……. He wants to tell her that “pls closeur mouth otherwise some fly will go inside” …… he wanted to scream….. “i am the one who is coming at ur home…“but he refrained himself from telling her,……  

 

beside of this, he cleared his throat which brought her back to this world and she found herself standing in the mid of the road with this stranger with whom just now she asked for the lift……..

 

Before she could able to say something to him, her cell buzzed even Maan’s also….. both looked at each other…… what a coincidence……. They felt……. She found the call from her house and he found call from her mom…… oops, , both are getting calls from the same house and here they are standing like strangers…….

 

He wend aside and attend the call, same happened with geet……  

 

Both were sitting in the car right now and staring at the road……. He has his concentration on his driving while she tried to count the moving trees…. Well it is so impossible to count moving trees but sometimes we felt to count them……. The weather was so soothing, grey sky, cool breeze and over that her stomach having jittery feeling in her stomach, ,

 

What’ll happen when she’ll reach at home….. guests will be waiting for her…… and she is here…. How her parents are managing everything?  She  had a glanced of his face, , why she is having the feeling of sitting with stranger….? She had never seen him before here…… then why this damn thing happening with her?

 

 

When she turned her eyes towards the window, , he glanced at her face…… he felt himself drowning again in her…… like yesterday night…… she is so near him…. In this car……. What I’ll ask from her when I’ll meet her officially? Some more questions lingering in his mind while his stomach flipped flopped because of anxiety, nervousness, fear…….

 

“fear” did he really scared for meeting with someone…. No..no actually with this girl who is sitting beside him……  I don’t know who made this kind of rituals….. how can anyone approve any girl in one meeting only…… he asked to himself…….

 

yaha se left” his reverie broke when he heard her…… she is telling him the way of her house….. what a destiny….. he thought that he’ll ask her the route of her house from someone but see, she is herself sitting her for taking him at her home……  is this really happened?  He nodded and moved the car in left direction……

 

Again he heard her screaming……. “bas…. Bas…stop here” and at once he put the brakes…..  she told him to stop the car little away from her house….. if anyone saw her then coming out from the starnger’s car when the peoples of her would be sasuraal are sitting in her home….. what they will think?

 

Actually geet is not like that…… all these things she learnt from her mother….. her mother is like we should never do this, we should do this…. Blah..blah…blah…… that’s y this idea popped in her mind….. she turned towards him….. “thank u, thank u so much…..” she thanked him so many times and flew away from the car without listening his “Mention not!”…. after ,her disappearing her murmured mention not and sighed deeply preparing himself to face the reality and the questioning eyes of her family members….

 

His eyes popped when he saw her climbing on the tree that is beside of her house in saree and then she found her jumping in the window from the tree , , he was about to run cause suddenly some fear get inside in his heart for her safety….if anything happen to her…… but he felt relieved when he saw she reached inside the room safely,……

 

And then his lips curved in a smile,,,,, so Geet knows how to climb up on the tree and that is in saree…..  chalo kuch to milta hai hum dono mein ….. he thought in his mind…….. he headed towards the house but he came back at once and looked at his face in the side mirror of car…. Is he looking nice or not?

 

 He looked at himself from top to bottom and realized that he forgot to change the clothes…. Even he didn’t Check In in the hotel…… he found mud on his black pant….. oh damn……  iss musibat ko bhi abhi aana tha…. He cursed himself…. And murmured some profanities for himself only……

 

He sat at the behind seat and locked the car properly , thank God, his car is having black glasses…..  he changed his clothes on the back seat itself…. Though he got some difficulties but still he managed….. now his hairs,…..he found the water bottle which he brought from his house……..  he came out from the car, wash his face with his mineral water…….. after some minutes……  now he is looking proper Maan Singh Khurana…. He sighed……

 

All the eyes moved towards him when he get enter in the house looking dashing in his real avatar…. After all he is Maan Singh Khurana…..  his family got relieved seeing him there…….

 

 

 

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36 thoughts on “~Drown in Love~ pt-10

  1. omg I am so loving this story yaar

    hayeee such a dreamy update…both nervous and excited and then his drooling and some new feelings, way to go Maan.

    arre waah got to see a new avatar of Geet, climbing and all

    the way he said…kuch toh milta hai hum dono mein…I was laughing for that…hehehe

    Me just waiting to know Geet’s reaction to everything, poor she, no doubt she will be embarrassed 😉

    pretty excited for the next….update soon.

  2. geet tho superwomen nikhli saree may tree chadi. tayyar honi ki kya zaroorat hai maan babu wo tho aapko dekh hi liya na ab kissko impress karna jisse karna hai wo tho hogayi

  3. Lovely part
    Maan thinking something common…..seeing geet climbing the tree…lol
    Waiting to see geet’s expressions seeing maan

  4. me fine sbas having stupid fever but now kk
    aha me so much lv their first meet
    silent drive to house
    something dancing in stomach glancing at each other
    n finally at home
    lv geet’s climbing tree in saree n maanu ky kha kuj toh milta hai babaji rofl
    n maanu b kam nhi chang in car n finally entry in house phew
    kitna time lgaya to come i house
    lvd it
    waitig 4 geet’s reaction seeing maanu there 😉

  5. Amazing update arey climbing tree dat too in saree gr8 geet ji maan again impressed
    so finally maan made his entry in sasural
    waiting for their official meeting

  6. awesome part
    loved it
    ha ha geet climbed the tree to enter into her room……….maan saw this……..
    he changed his dress in car itself………….
    waiting for their meeting …………geet gonna get a shock of her life seeing him there as her groom

  7. hi dear…awesum update! Maan drops her nera her house! Geet does nt wanna create ny problems! So she climbs a tree n gets in her house! that too in a saree! Maan surprised! Maan makes himself presentable n enters ! Hmm waiting 4 dem to meet! update soon! Well written! Shld b comment here or IF?

  8. First one…yeah….awesome update…I can imagine how funny it will be to se her climb the window in saree…lol Maan getting ready was funny too….awesome update

  9. so now geet going to meet his would be . come soon …………….

    mast update tha …………………

    maan full too lattu on our geet ……………….

    hi common tree climbing……………….. good ……………………..

  10. Wow what a thrill U’ve created Neha,I m having sm feeling in my stomach that how wud it feel if smthng like this happened with me[Coz I know I m gonna have an arranged marriag so possibilities are there]

    Geet sitting in Maan’s car thinking of reaching home fast to meet the supposed Groom and his family and the groom himself driving her home.Maan feelin nervousness and fear [Eighth wonder] to officially meet her wud be bride who is already sitting with him.God the feeling is so exciting.

    And then,Maan sees her climb up a tree,woohoo,that too in a saree [Kya jodi banegi dono ki,masha allah]

    And after changing in the car [MSK changing in the car,hmmm,another wonder] our Hero is full prepared to meet HIS Geet!!!!!!;

    God Neha I cant wait to see Geet’s expressions when she sees and recognises Maan.Mazaa aane waala hai!!!!!

    Waiting eagerly for another superb.

    [And you know what,you made me jump with joy [jst like I m riding a pogo stick] by mentioning that you love my comments.God,you made me elated.Thanx a ton buddy.Love ya]

  11. Neha di apne bulaya aur ham chale aye..btw maaneet ko bi mila do abhi…meko laga If k id k bina ap meko pehchanoge nahi bt i was wrong..waise neha di ye maan to bada chalu hai..hye unko dekhna hai isliye taiyari shayari..gd maan keep it up bt jab neha di chahegi tabhi ap geet se miloge..awsme neha di..love you

  12. me tu yahan complain karne ai thi k update nahi di ab tak
    But i think i missed this
    She climed tree in a sari . .
    Maan was scared
    He change in car
    Pehli official mulaqat . .
    What will be geet’s reaction?
    Waiting for next

  13. geet showing him her home…..whts irony…..

    beautiful update…

    loved it very much…

    thank u very much fr d lovely update…

    waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly…

    continue soon plz…

  14. awsum part
    maan thinking that he was going to ask someone geet address bt see here geet only showing him where to go hayeeeeeee
    omggggggggggg geet climbing tree in sari lol
    hehe maan finding sme similarity between him n geet as she saw her climbing the tree
    superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

  15. both nervous and excited and then his drooling and some new feelings, way to go Maan.
    a new avatar of Geet, climbing a tree in a saree
    now I’m looking forward to seeing Geets reaction when she sees the stranger is her would be hubby
    again an awesome update

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