~Drown in Love~ Part-1


~Drown in Love~

Part-1

 

Rano ji….. rano ji….” A man shouted while entering in the house closing his umbrella……  uff….. iss barish ko bhi aaj hi aana tha…” he murmured to himself putting off his shoes at the entrance of the house otherwise no one can save him from his wife’s wrath when she’ll find that her husband’s shoes leave all the marks on neatly cleaned shinned floor, , the floor where anyone can see his/her face………

 

kya hai ji? Why are you shouting?” asked rano aka rano ji in language of her husband…….  She came in hall wiping her hand with her dupatta while coming from the kitchen……  where were you rano ji?” asked that man…… “ki hoya? Kuch to batayiye….. I was washing utensils….. “

 

achha ji…. First give me towel….. apne aap ko bahut bachaya fir bhi barish me bheeg hi gaya……..” he told to rano……. “oho mohinder ji, , aap kyun murmur kar rahe ho….. first you tell me when u knew that rain is about to come then why you came here? You should be there na at your club with your friends… ” she told him…….

 

Mohinder Handa……. A retired colonel , , very strict in discipline and love his children to the core, and pamper them a lot but still put some restrictions on them but that too for their safety…… he loved his wife a lot, , addressed her as Rano ji….. never call her without ji….. that is his love for his wife where rano loves to hear rano ji from his mouth……..

 

Mohinder wiped his hands and feet then entered inside the house….. “achha ji ab batayiye itni jaldi kyat hi barish me ghar aane ki?” asked rano from mohinder…….. hearing the question from her, suddenly he beamed with happiness, the reason of behind his early landing in his own house……

 

rano ji, , rano ji…… you won’t believe who is coming tomorrow……” a sudden happiness appeared on his face……..though he is very restrict person but still he became happy in small-2 things……. “kaun aa raha hai ji?” she asked unaware of his happiness……   khurana family is coming to see our geet……  isn’t that great?” asked mohinder……. He sat there on the couch………..

 

yeh to bahut achhi baat hai…..wahi hai na jiske bare me sharama ji ne bataya tha… suna hai unka bada beta bahut ache se business sambhalta hai….” She told to him……. “haan ji…… but he is very well known crime branch officer….” He told with too much proud…… 

 

and one more things…… Arjun also knew him….. actually they were friends in school… “…….he paused for a second….. he took rano’s hand in his hand….. and spoke softly…….. “mai dil se chahta hu ki hamari geet ki shaadi ussi se ho……..” mohinder stated finally…… it’s his wish…….. “meri bhi yahi tamanna hai….. ” rano answered him back softly like him………

 

ahem….ahem….” two girls coughed interrupting their private talks…… “mummy papa, romance  kar rahe hai…” one girl murmured in second girl’s ear…… “chup kar…” second girl smacked first one’s……. 

 

both of you stop your whispering  session….” Told mohinder sternly….. both girls stood there dipped their head…….. mohinder signaled to rano, time to tell them that a man is coming for her, soon she’ll fly away from their house……

 

geet puttar…… yaha aa, mere paas baith to zara…” mohinder spoke softly this time….  If he is stern that only for their well being otherwise there is no intentions being strict with them…… geet nodded and sat beside him on the couch……

 

puttar, , you know who is coming tomorrow?” asked mohinder while the other girl looked at rano asking from her while rano shook her head and signaled her to sit with her…….  While geet looked at her papa asking to him who is coming from her eyes……

 

beta ji, tomorrow is a guy coming to seeing you….. tere rishtey ke liye….. your alliance beta,…” he spoke with immense happiness…… the other girl squealed in happiness……..

 

sachi me, di ka rishta aaya hai….. “…….. “mai abhi bhabhi ko bata kar aati hu…” saying so she ran upside on the terrace giving good news to her Sonia bhabhi……

 

geet, isi khushi me chai aur pakode ho jaaye…” he told her while geet nodded and headed towards the kitchen for making tea and pakode……

 

 

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ridhima…..” she screamed her little sister name when she found her using her make up kit…..  her      temperature went high seeing the scene……  ridzy looked at her big sister from the mirror and gave a innocent smile like maine kya kiya types? Where she was fuming in anger……. “there, mama is calling you and here you are becoming beauty queen….. abhi batati hu…ruk… ” saying so she started to move downside but stopped by ridzy……

 

di…. What are you doing?” asked ridzy….. “pls di…. Don’t I have the right to look beautiful when my would be jiju is coming….” She battled her lashes trying to put the correct excuse…… “oye, abhi huye nahi hai…… he is coming to see me” she replied her back….. ridzy held her hand and made her sit on the bed…….

 

what happen di? Why are you looking tense?” asked ridzy in concern…… “darr lag raha hai ki wo aapko pasand karenge ya nahi?” ridzy asked again trying to figure out what she is feeling right now…..  because she knew that her sister call her ridhima when she is really upset, tensed or something else…. Otherwise she always call her ridzy……

 

I don’t know ridhima…. I just felt kahi mujhe napasand kar diya toh….. I mean mummy papa ko bahut hopes hai……” replied geet……

 

Geet , a 22 years old girl… just now finished her studies, , and wanted to do a job in software field….. very ambitious yet little hopeless…… she wanted to join Navy but left it because of her mother doesn’t want it… so she made her career in software field…frightened on a small-2 things which is related to her dear ones……… like she done something for someone and the fear will that person like it? And now, her biggest fear is that will he like her? Or reject her?

 

di, I know something is more there which is bugging your head…. Now spit out” spoke ridzy……  actually ridzy, , I heard, I mean papa was telling to mama that he is police officer….” Replied geet back…..

 

so…. What’s the problem in being a police officer? It will be good na….. he’ll take care of you 24 hours….” Ridzy winked at her after finishing……. “nothing is like that….. actually, they don’t have the proper time for their family and they always play with danger….. “……….. geet  put her fear in front of her…….

 

di, that doesn’t matter….. if he’ll love you enough then you will adjust yourself according to his time period……iss baat se mood off karne ki jarurat nahi hai…..” ridzy tried  to be calm and a mature person…. Though geet is elder than her but sometimes she speaks like a child and ridzy played a role of elder sister…… geet nodded hearing her mature talks…….

 

geet…” one person called her….. 

Geet looked at the source of voice and found her bhabhi standing there……. “geet, nothing is like that as you are thinking….. ” geet looked at her getting what she is talking about…… “bhabhi, what do you mean?” asked geet…….. Sonia smiled at her nave  sister-in-law……. “geet, you think that police officer doesn’t give much time to their family, , ” geet nodded…… “jaise ki Arjun veer ji…. ” geet made a face…… Sonia smiled again……

 

nothing is like that geetu…… Arjun got his posting in Darjeeling because he is in army….. but the man who is coming to see you, he lives in delhi and work there only…. And he is in crime branch….….. and crime branch officer doesn’t get posting and they don’t have this particular duties like 9 to 5 and all…. Don’t worry…… you’ll be happy with him….” (I don’t know anything about the crime branch….so pls take it as a fiction only…. )

 

Sonia told her one more thing…… “and you know what, I also knew him…. After school, once I met him, he is very nice person too, doesn’t like Arjun and papa ji….” Geet nodded feeling little light…..

 

thank you bhabhi…” geet spoke and hugged her tightly……. “dekha, I was trying to tell her but she is like…uff….” Whined ridzy jumped on her make up kit……..

 

geet, , don’t let enter that fear inside your heart….. you should be proud on papa ji, arjun…. And the one who is coming to see you tomorrow…. ” geet looked at Sonia…… she knew she is little wrong here….. from the childhood she used to hear that one day she’ll get marry with a person who’ll be in police or in army or something else……. She always has a fear for their safety, , she knew she shouldn’t be but this damn heart…….

 

geet….. and rest about the danger then anything can happen anywhere….. zaruri toh nahi ki danger sirf border par ya fir war mein ho…. Danger toh yaha bhi ho sakta hai iss room mein….. so don’t get scared about that..hmm…..samjhi….” Sonia again tried to assure her with her simple words……… geet smiled hearing her, , somewhere little fear flew away………. She let out a deep sigh and smiled…….

 

di…. Don’t worry….. meet him one time…. What’s the big deal….. pasand aayegenge then ok otherwise say no on his face….” Told ridzy to geet where geet just smiled……  how can she say no to her parent’s choice……

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~Drown in Love~ CS

Mohinder Handa & Rano Handa


Geet Handa

Ridhima Handa

Arjun Handa

Sonia Arjun Handa



Maan Singh Khurana

Vickrant aka vicky Khurana

Anvesha aka annie Khurana (same as ghsp)

More characters will add later…

Fanna Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri “Epilogue”

 

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Epilogue

 

Now maan got that she is taking this sweet revenge from him….. he got it properly….. “haan kyo nahi geet…… mai to parantha kha lunga wo bhi aaloo ka….but you have to drink my black coffee in return…. Itna to tum mere liye kar hi sakti ho na?” asked maan smirking inwardly….. where dadi and annie laughed inwardly seeing their tom n jerry fight where cute little Vedanta was engrossed in his pasta ………

 

Hearing his words, her lips curved in a pout and made baby face where maan smirked, , yahi hoga if u’ll strangle with maan khurana….. he thought in his mind and enjoyed his aaloo parantha,,,,,,,  when all finished their breakfast…… now geet has to drink his  black coffee…… maan pushed his cup in front of her and she looked at him, , he signaled to her telling her that drink it………

 

She looked at everyone, try to say him no but he shook his head and signaled her to go ahead….. she nodded quietly and sipped his black coffee……. Cursing herself for strangling with him….. what is the need of teasing him….ab bhugto……

 

Maan happily made an announcement……. “well, , hamein kahi jana hai…. To aap sab ready rehna ”, , he told to everyone……. “lekin kaha maan?” asked dadi….. geet didn’t spoke this time cause she knew, if she ask anything to him then he is not going to tell her anything…. “mujhe ek baat batayiye, yaha koi bhi bina kisi question ke kuch kar nahi sakta kya?” asked maan……

 

lekin bhai fir bhi, I mean if you tell me where are we going then according to that we’ll wear dress…… ” well there is a point …… though maan but he has the solution for that where geet was thinking now he has to tell what is the surprise but her face fell when he told the solution…….

 

don’t worry about that….. nakul….come here….” Maan called nakul……. Nakul came there, , “nakul, bring those packets from the outhouse which I told you to keep there….” Maan said to him…. He nodded and leave to outhouse……. “maan, what are you planning?” asked dadi this time getting suspicious on him,,,,,,,, “nothing much dadi….. keep faith in me….”

 

In 10 mins, nakul came there with the packets….. maan gave the packets everyone, on the packets, he had written their names…… and in the last….. “geet, this is for you, , go in your room and get ready fast….. and now pls don’t throw any question…. ” saying so , maan left from there making urgent calls, and everyone gaped at their packets …… now they got the hint something big has been planned…..

 

Everyone retired to their room but geet went first in vedanta’s room and get him ready….. later he went in dadi’s room and geet went in hers….. there maan is all set…. Clad in his black attire, top to toe in black….. ….

 

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Geet had a huge urge to kiss him right there but stopped herself for not falling on him more and took her packet, went in bathroom for getting ready……  he knew she was all watching him , umm like scanning him…well he love to be scan by her but now, this is not a correct time……

 

After some minutes, she came out, clad in a peach and red color dress, , looking totally ravishing…. Though geet was all angry on maan but she is in love with this dress….. it was so beautiful….

 

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Complementing to her beauty…… maan in a trance moved towards her itself where she blushed realizing his steps towards her…… she was standing in front of huge mirror in their room and behind stood behind her barely touching her  but still she can feel his chest touching to her back……..  she bit her lip, ohh damn he gulped hard looking at her when she bit her lip……

 

He pushed her curls aside on her shoulder and dipped his head in her shoulder rubbing softly his lips on her little bare skin which he found between her ear and dress….. the dress has half collar in it…… “maan, please” she spoke between her pants, , maan placed his hand on her abdomen and nuzzled his nose on her plump cheeks….. she smiled then pushed his hand and pushed him outside of the room where maan sighed, now she is gonna take time in getting ready……knowing her very well, he went away looking for others…..

 

 

After some time all gathered in hall and headed towards the car…. None had asked further questions from maan because he had already said no more question…. Well everyone had a little fear from maan so they zipped their mouth…….

 

In one hour or so they reached to the airport where his personal jet was waiting for them….. his mens put his luggage there inside the jet and all went inside the jet…….  Well now they were quite sure, they are going outside of delhi….. but where, who knew beside of maan?

 

Now they are in air, all clad in shimmering beautiful dresses like they are going in some wedding, , may be they are going or may be not……. Where maan smirked looking at their gloomy faces….. he wants to give them surprise and the happiness which will appear on their faces, that will be worth watching……. ,

 

After tow hour or so, they reached at their destination, , they came out and headed outside of the airport, , but before they entered in the car, geet squealed in happiness when realization went in her head……..”maan,, we are in Mumbai…. Pehle kyo nahi bataya….” She asked…. Where maan just smiled at her zeal but when she will get the real reason of coming here, then she’ll be over moon……. “geet, , pehle bata deta to ye khushi tumhare face par nahi hoti” everyone nodded at his statement….

 

They sat in the car where maan called to someone….. “hello…. Yeah maan here….” …… “yup, we are coming,,,,,, in half hour or so…. ” he spoke where geet curiously looking at maan trying to peep at mobile’s screen but poor she, maan didn’t let her…… she made grumpy face again, she wants to meet her dad, bhai and bhabhi but here he is not telling her anything………..

 

They reached at the destination but before stepped outside, , maan tied a blindfold around geet’s eyes where dadi also tied a blindfold around annie’s eyes……  both gals shout but none hear and stepped outside……they entered in the hall where everyone was present….. but dark was everywhere….. maan opened her blindfold and annie’s too but there was no need of adjust their eyes according to the light cause light was not there……

 

maan, itna dark kyo hai yaha?” asked geet….. “haan bhai, you know na, I fear so much from darkness….. ”……… “achha anvesha, mujhe toh ya pata nahi tha…. ” spoke a man……. Annie heard the voice and tried to guess who’s voice? But before she could reply, geet asked “arjun?”………… “yeh lo, jisey guess karna tha, usne to guess kiya nahi…. Geet, why you always try to be oversmart….. close ur big mouth…” told maan to her, her mouth flung open and she turned other side from him……

 

Suddenly lights turned on and they found arjun on his knees in front of annie and Vicky too in front of alka….. “what is going on here?” asked geet , she is little bit confused but her confusion all cleared like all clear shampoo washed away the dandruff from the head……  when she read the board which is hanging aside, ,

 

written their Engagement….. Vicky & Alka……. Arjun & Anvesha……….she beamed with happiness…. That was the surprise…… par mujhe kisi ne batay kyu nahi… she whined in her mind looking at maan where maan mouthered her sorry and secretly held his ears…..

 

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maan knew that annie and arjun loved each other and he didn’t want that they meet with each other secretly , media caught them, so he planned everything and though to give them surprise….

 

She nodded and chupke se planted a kiss on his cheek…… all eyes turned towards arjun and annie where they saw Vedanta is standing near them and looking curiously ….. “aapke legs mein pain hai…. ?” asked Vedanta cutely……  arjun looked at him…… “no beta, mai aapki bua ko propose kar raha hu…” replied arjun back…… “woh kya hota hai?” just then a cute little girl came there, , with her parents, , they are the close of friend of tej…… that cute little girl found Vedanta more cute and she planted a kiss on his cheek…. Spoke cutely….. “lub u…”….

 

All first became shocked and then burst in laugh….. “arjun, mere bête ko kisi ne propose kar liya aur tujhse abhi tak nahi hua….. learn something from them…” geet taunt him, ,  before arjun could say something, they heard alka’s voice saying I love you Vicky…… all clapped for them…. And then they heard another voice….. “will you marry me Miss Anvesha khurana?” and then they heard yes….. all cheered for them….. geet ran, first hug to her friends, alka and Vicky….. taunt them, congratulate them and gave so much gaalis too for hiding from her and then arjun’s turn…….

 

Happily, , both couples get engaged, later they hit the dance floor with the latest number of songs, there she got another news which made her more happy that Tanya is expecting…. She wanted to give this news to her before but maan denied her and told her that when they’ll come Mumbai, that time tell her everything….. geet was really at the 7th heaven now…. Too much happiness around her….. she hugged maan tightly and pulled him towards the dance floor where her friends doing a little bhangra or mix up with street dance….. actually expressing their happiness only…..

 

Where Vedanta & that little girl roaming everywhere holding hands….. just then maan pulled geet in a bone crushing hug… he is really happy man today just because of geet….. all the happiness around him, just because of geet…… thank go maan, you held me tight, otherwise I crashed the floor, why I am feeling this darkness in front of my eyes, itni light hai fir bhi….. she is speaking in her mind, , she tried to hug him tight but her arms left on her side and then he felt her all weight falling down…..

 

A fear ran through his mind, he held her tight but she fall down in his arm…. Maan held her properly sitting on the floor tried to wake her….. “geet…. Geet, kya hua?” all stopped looking at them and everyone ran towards them….. “geet, open your eyes… ” one of them sprinkled water on her face but nothing happened…… “I think we should call the doctor” maan nodded….. he took her in his arms and headed upward towards her room….., , alka opened the gate and switch on the lights, maan put her on the bed safely and tucked the sheet on her till hr chest…… 

 

H looked around but didn’t gave a thought….. “doc ko call kiya?” asked maan….. “haan maan, doc is coming…. She lives near our house and it’s good today she didn’t went in her clinic,,,,just 5 mins” maan nodded…. And sprinkle more water on her face….. maan sat there holding her hand in his… he is really scared  a lot…. He doesn’t want to loose geet at any cost….  Just then doc came …. She told them, please go outside…… “doc, can I stay here?” asked maan…… “aap?” asked doc…. “I am her husband” replied maan knowing her confusion….

 

okay” doc nodded and everyone left from there beside of maan….. doc was checking her and maan sat beside of her…… “gud news…. ” said doc…..

 “what doc.?” Asked maan……

 “aap papa banne wale ho…..” hearing those words, maan beamed with happiness…..

 “really doc…” asked maan again….. doc nodded……

but”……….. “kya hua doc?” asked maan…..

she is looking little pale, like lack of blood…. Did she has nay medical history, according to that I’ll prescribe her medicines…. ?” asked doc…..

 “yes doc…. ”……….. “can I have the reports please?” asked doc again…… maan nodded…. He took out his cell and called to the doc who operated geet…. That doc well knew maan very well….. he told everything to that doc and asked can they mail him her reports and in no time, , he got her reports…………..

 

Everyone was very happy hearing the news but still geet was unconscious…… doc read the reports and talked with maan personally alone….. “right now, she is still little weak because when she had an operation and miscarriage, there she had a heavy blood loss, and now still she is having hemoglobin problem…. And lack of blood in her body…. You have to be very careful with her, her diet and don’t be over physical ..okay” maan nodded and replied, he’ll be careful with her……

 

Later everyone left them alone in the room…. Maan looked around the room and found his big posters on the walls, his photo frames there….. he observed his each n every picture…. Those pics were before their marriage…. Around 2-3 or 4 years back….. his eyes filled seeing her madness towards him….. when he felt she is looking at him, means she gained her consciousness,,,,, he ran towards her and planted a kiss on her forehead…… “thank u geet for this…” he said placing his hand on her stomach eying her….. first she got confused and then her eyes went big, then bigger “really maan…..? ” asked geet….

 

Maan nodded and hugged her tight telling her so many thank u’’’’’ and finally maan captured her lips in a soul searing kiss, a kiss of thank you for coming in his life, a thank you for loving him like a mad person……. and both lost in their another world………………….

 

 

THE END…..

 

Thanks a lot for being with me in this journey…. Now they entered in the new phase of life, and yeah now leave them alone…when maan was talking with doc, that time I got that maan n geet both knew about the miscarriage but hiding from each other…..so I thought that  let them discover more truth or secrets of their life….. …….

Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri “Last Part”

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Last part….

 

 

After lots of strokes, he fell down on her, tired, sweating, panting completely, while she massaged his hairs and caressing his back slowly giving him warmth yet love…… he doesn’t know when sleep took over him and he was lying down on the mattress and she was on him, resting her head on his chest holding his waist lovingly while his one hand around her waist securely,,,, a white quilt around them giving the warmth to their nude bodies in this cold….. she raised her face and kissed his forehead and slept placing her head on his chest……….

 

It was night when both woke up, , they stir in their sleep, , geet rubbed her cheek on his nude chest in her half sleep, , he felt current in his half sleep too…… he snaked his hand on her bare back rubbing it sensuously and she tighten her hold around his waist, curling her leg between his legs where he crossed his both legs taking hers between his…..  and both lost in each other in another love making session…….

 

1 year later…….

 

maan, pls…. it’s enough now…” geet tried to denied while kissing him back with the equal flavor, giving him the same pleasure, pulling his hairs in her fist, he groaned pushing her to the mattress leaving her lips, trailing down his lips down to her neck and bit her collarbone so hard making her flinch in pain, leaving the red mark on her skin…….. “no geet….. abhi mera breakfast nahi hua…..” he spoke to her nipping her skin more……

 

She pushed his face more in to her valley of her breasts not able to hold herself more but still she made little efforts more…….  “maan, , pls, vedu ko school jana hai…” she spoke in her hurry breath, , she is panting with the intensity of his kisses……. “geet, you forgot, from today onwards, Vedanta is having his vacations….” Saying so he captured her lips in soul searing kiss…….

 

After having lots of kisses, , he finally fell down on her panting heavily, , still their breath mingling with each other…… he looked up at her face, , her face flushed and everywhere, red marks on her skin, claimed by him…. Like she is possession…… his life, his soul…… everything she is his……

 

geet, get ready…. There is surprise for you…. ” he told her…… she looked at him with her questioning eyes……. “kaha maan?” asked geet to him…… “do you really think that I’ll tell you?” asked maan……. She nodded making baby face and showing him her cute puppy eyes asking to him…… he shook his head knowing her this much…. How much nautanki she is when it comes to any surprise…….

 

don’t give me those looks, this time they won’t work…” he warned her this time…. Otherwise everytime, whenever he wants to give her surprise and told her to be ready till this time, she gave him those puppy looks, pouting lips and he land up to tell her where they are going but this time, he made up his mind that he won’t tell her where he’ll take her…….

 

She sighed knowing his resolutions….. this time he’ll fulfill his promise which he did to himself like he made any resolution on new year……. “now you are not going to tell me this little or big secret of yours, can I go now…. ? mujhe bahut kaam hai….” She spoke showing little bit attitude now…. Thinking that may be he’ll melt but her mouth flung open when he gave her space and throw his shirt in her lap, telling her indirectly that wear it and get ready…… her cheeks puffed when he closed his eyes and covered himself with the sheet….

 

In anger, she wore his shirt but she land up in tearing apart the buttons from the shirt…… he smiled knowing her jhuta gussa…… but he can imagine the glow on her face when she’ll get the surprise…… he sighed and lay on bed by his stomach……  she came in room after getting ready but her anger raised high when she saw him sleeping properly…….   

 

She went away leaving him alone with his so cold surprise but he smirked and said sorry to her in his mind……… she went in vedanta’s room waking him up…… but poor she, Vedanta snuggled in her lap finding the warmth of hers…..  “vedu baby, pls get up….” Geet tried to wake him up…… “ummm….. mama….no….” he cried in his sleep……

 

baby, kitna late ho gaya hai…” she tried again…… “mommy…Sunday hai…” he told her the fact…… “no baby… aaj Monday hai…” she replied him telling him he is wrong….. “ummm mommy….. holidays hai…” now he told the proper fact to hers….. “theek hai… holidays hai to mama aapko pasta nahi dengi” hearing that, his sat up at once……..well pasta his fav dish like his father loves pasta…….

 

Geet smiled at his victory and took him to the bathroom….. chalo koi toh meri suntan nahi…. She thought in her mind…..and get him ready…….

 

Later at the breakfast table, , everyone is present there……. Geet smiled thinking of something and served everyone beside of maan…… he looked at her where everyone is busy in their breakfast…….. “geet, where is my black coffee?” asked maan……. Hearing him…. She smacked at her forehead like she forget….. “oh gosh….sorry maan….. aaj mai banana bhool gayi….”

 

He stared at her means how can she forget that….. that is her daily routine…… everyone looks at her…. She faked a nervous smile….. “ek min maan……. Nakul…… maan ke liye black coffee lana….”  He stayed calm for a while than thought to he can have his coffee later……

 

Now he can eat something else…… “achha geet, pasta pass karna…” told maan to geet….. geet took the bowl in her hands…… “oops maan, pasta to finish ho gaya” she gave him sorry look….. “but geet kaise? Tumne mere liye nahi banaya tha?” asked maan…. Now anyone can feel the heat of anger which is coming out from his head and eyes……

 

nahi maan…. Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai, aapki fav dish aur mai aapke liye na banau…. Nahi na…. ” replied geet…….. “toh fir kya baat hai bête?” asked dadi from geet…… 

 

nahi dadi… actually pasta finish ho gaya…. Yesterday I forgot to check…. Aur fir jitna tha wo maine bana diya….. ab wo vedu ne annie ne le liya to…. Maan koi baat nahi

 

she turned to maan….. “maan, aap parantha lenge….. aaloo ka…. Agar aapko chahiye to mai abhi aapke liye mushroom omlet ya haan cheese sandwitch bana deti hu

 

Now maan got that she is taking this sweet revenge from him….. he got it properly….. “haan kyo nahi geet…… mai to parantha kha lunga wo bhi aaloo ka….but you have to drink my black coffee in return…. Itna to tum mere liye kar hi sakti ho na?” asked maan smirking inwardly…..actually geet used to like black coffee but suddenly she felt like to sip coffee with milk and then she switched to coffee with milk… where dadi and annie laughed inwardly seeing their tom n jerry fight where cute little Vedanta was engrossed in his pasta ………..

 

 

Managed this much today only…. Actually typed aashiqui and this one too….. next is epilogue….. thank u so much for the likes and comments……

Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri part-66

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Part-66

 

She used to think, whenever they’ll get intimate, he’ll do this  and that first but nothing happened of that sort, he is doing according to his will, giving her more pleasure when he bit the tip of her breast making her scream…… “aah-ha-maan…” she moaned in pain….. he stopped and looked at her face…..

 

But there was no pain on her face, in fact her face was glowing more, like some inner happiness oozed out on her face…….”ohh geet…” he moaned when geet scratched his back with her sharp nails……. He again looked at her face with a mischievous  expressions on his face……. He got up at once from her body, she opened her eyes not feeling his warmth…..

 

When she looked at him, , she found he is searching something, , “maan, kya searching?” she asked to him while he glanced at her and gave stern expressions…… she pouted looking at him….. thinking now what she did? Why he is so angry? But when she again looked at him, she found mischievous glint in his eyes and he is hiding something behind him……

 

maan, kya chhupa rahe ho? Aur waha kya kar rahe ho? Aao na pls….” she asked and begged too from him,…….he shook his head and then pulled her towards him , taking her hands in his……. She was carefully looking at him……. But her eyes widen when she saw what he was holding in his hand……

 

maan, no pls….” she warned him but it was like a plead……. “nope geet……….. your nails scratched my back a lot…. It’s paining yaar a lot” and he started cutting nails……. “and that pain you are giving me…uska kya?” she complained to him,…… “where I gave you pain?” he asked with an innocent face…….. “yaha” she pointed at her neck…… “aur?” asked maan again…… “yaha” she pointed at her lips……. “achha….” He said and naughtily asked again……”aur kaha geet?” asked maan…… 

 

Without thinking she pointed at her curves and maan smirked and then her mouth widen , where she had pointed, , and red hue spread on her face….. she hid her face in her palm but the realization went in her head………she looked at her hands, her nails neatly cut, , she pouted cutely looking at him…… and turned her face other side….. maan smiled……

 

achha, I’ll apply balm” saying so he made her lay down and came on top of her, she closed her face feeling his warm breath on her face……her chest went up and down , he dipped his face in her neck, placing slow and sensuous kisses by his warm lips….. she took out a breath of relief when his lips soothing her sensitive area where he had bitten her first……

 

A moan escaped from her mouth……. “o-oh,,,,,maan!”, , his lips moved down kissing her slowly soothing the pain and then finally his warm mouth took the tip of her breast , nibbling it so slowly, giving her so pleasure, she massaged his hairs , she was moaning his name again and again…… he opened the button of her jeans and at once made her half sit on the bed holding her by her waist…..

 

Desperately he took out her jeans from her slender legs, , with trembling hands, she tried to put off his jeans also but she failed…. Seeing her, maan helped in removing his jeans, and now both were under garments,…….  He started smooching around the panty line tracing her inner thighs by his long fingers giving more goosebumps in her body……

 

She held his head in her hands and pushed more, he groaned and at once her panty tear apart into two pieces…… her face became more red when she found she is completely naked infront of him and he is drinking her beauty with his naked eyes……

maan came on top of her and captured her lips in his while his hand moved to her inner thighs , caressing them, , his finger found her lips and started caressing them , she was so wet……. “ohh….geet….. you are so wet” he spoke kissing her, , she bit him back hearing his words….. he groaned again and his slow kiss became the passionate one……

 

His one finger entered inside her feeling her warm juice, thrusting her, she closed her eyes , dig her  fingers in his biceps feeling pain….. “aah” she moaned again…. Hearing her moaning, he increased his pace and his two fingers replaced with one…. Thrusting her more deep inside her core, , she tighten the her thighs holding his hand between hers while his lips were giving pleasure to her curves making them red, sore , biting them with his teeth and then soothed the reddish area by his lips…..

 

He came on the top of her parting her legs away and locking them around his waist, he was between her legs, , both were sweating and panting in this cold…… “geet,” he called her….. “look at me” he commanded her…… she opened her eyes and looked direct in his eyes….. “are you ready?” he asked to her while she gave him her dazzling smile with a different glow in her eyes and she nodded completely……

 

don’t close your eyes….” He told her where she nodded again….. saying so he adjusted himself at her core but his eyes was gazing deeply in hers like they are speaking with each other……. He captured her lips and then a sudden pain hit her body when he entered his manhood in her core in one thrust…..

 

A tear escaped from her eyes, but he wiped that and kissed her more and thrusting her deep,, she pulled his hairs more while reciprocating the kiss completely tightening her hold of her legs around his waist….. he broke out the kiss….. “are you fine?” asked maan in concern….. last time when they were intimate, he was not in his sense, but this time he doesn’t want to give her pain and relish every moment of their togetherness…… he wants to give all the happiness to her……..

 

She nodded , wiping the sweat beads from his forehead and kissed at the tip of his nose…. He smiled at her gesture and thrust her more…… she was feeling like he is touching the walls of her womb, this much deep he went inside her……

 

After lots of strokes, he fell down on her, tired, sweating, panting completely, while she massaged his hairs and caressing his back slowly giving him warmth yet love…… he doesn’t know when sleep took over him and he was lying down on the mattress and she was on him, resting her head on his chest holding his waist lovingly while his one hand around her waist securely,,,, a white quilt around them giving the warmth to their nude bodies in this cold….. she raised her face and kissed his forehead and slept placing her head on his chest……..

 

 

 

thanks a lot frnds for clearing my confusion here…. seems u remember this story instead of me…. lolz…. seems i am not the writer…… will try to clear all the loop holes…okie..

thanks for a wonderful response

love ya

Neha

Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri part-65

pon

 

 

part-65

 

Both were watching the serene view and inhaling the fresh air which is really soothing their mind and body……  maan clutched her fingers in his holding them lovingly , assuring himself that they are together now , no misunderstanding can make them apart…. He loves her…….

 

It was around a while both were sitting together, calm and compose…. No movements, just holding hands and watching the serene view in front of their eyes…. The beauty nature has…. A gush of chilled wind passed from their face and at once he felt her silky hairs covered his face, he closed his eyes at once, deep inhaling the fragrance of shampooed hairs,  she carries a different scent in her body, in her every part….. whenever he inhaled her fragrance, that thrilled him…..

 

Geet tried to move away her hairs from his face but he held her hand and dipped his head in the hollow of her neck inhaling directly from there….. she closed her eyes feeling ticklish by his warm breath that is fanning direct on her bare skin of her neck…… she clutched his shoulder in her fist and tried to be calm but the movements of his hand lost the last string she was holding, and she responded back to him , kissing below his chin, moving her lips on his jaw line holding his face in her palms……

 

Before her lips reached to his lips and met with his, he scooped her in his arms and headed towards their car, hoping her in , took the driver seat and he drove off towards the ….. while cottage driving, she tried to give him wet kisses on his cheeks, caressing his thigh by her palm, both couldn’t control anymore…… maan drove so fast as much as he could….. he doesn’t want her to be longing for him….. as much as she wants to feast him, as much he wants…..

 

The drive of 15 mins seems like ages for them… she was cursing herself that she shouldn’t have stopped him at the first place, , now bear the craving……  he stopped his car in the parking and come out, she hurriedly open the door and stepped  outside….. he wants to scoop her in his arms but it doesn’t look nice at this place….. people will give them weird looks, and he doesn’t want that……

 

Locking the car door, both held each other hand dragged each other…….actually none knew that who was dragging who? As soon as they stopped in front of their cottage door……, both hugged each other so tight, like they were craving from ages, for touch of their love, , it’s hardly 2 hours, both got out from the bed and now, this much craving for each other……

 

maan, please don’t wait for the night” she spoke kissing madly around his neck, where he was so much enjoying the feel oh her petals on his skin…. Somehow he managed to open the door otherwise they’ll land up outside of the cottage itself…. As soon as he shut the door, he found her fingers on his coat buttons and his fingers on hers, unbuttoning each other coats, , their coats fell down at their feet, maan scooped her in his arms now and headed towards their room……

 

Both entered in the room and maan shut the door by his feet, , maan land her on the bed, she went on her knees at once and held him by his nape, started kissing him like a maniac….. he removed his shoes by his feet itself and landed on her taking her beneath him….. her fingers curled in his hairs pulling him more, she doesn’t know from where she became so violent towards him….

 

The need of having him with her…..  he was nibbling her lower lip while his hand was roaming on her side, her stomach…., , she tried to open unbutton his shirt but failed…. Seeing her futile attempts, he back out from the kiss, , and went on his knew but she was still under him between his legs…… he unbuttoned his shirt quickly and tossed his shirt far away from his reach, did the same with his vest….. he was looking deep in her eyes and felt immense love……

 

He unbuckled his belt and then fingers moved to the button…..  here he was striping himself, there she was lying there all dressed…. He didn’t like it at all but undressing her, there is different fun…. He hovered on her , giving wet kisses on her neck, moving upward to her jaw line while his hand working to undress her, , slowly unbuttoning her shirt where she pulling him more close by his neck, ,

 

She curled up her legs direct rubbing his manhood…..  he closed his eyes feeling that he’ll explode right now….. and finally he captured her lips , taking her both lips in his, nibbling so passionately , he groaned when she bit his lip and then in a revenge, he bit her back on her lip opening her mouth further taking an entry in her mouth, entangling his tongue with hers, touching the deep secrets of hers, tasting the sweet nectar……

 

Meanwhile her shirt was completely open giving the full view of her milky creamy skin, where his eyes tuck on her breasts, covered with a thin material holding them properly, , his eyes clouded with passion more….. her eyes were shut feeling his bare skin now touching with hers, , after a few nanoseconds, she was jolted when she felt his large palm covering his breast , she didn’t knew when her bra went away from her body …….

 

He left her lips, and come down trailing the kisses on her collarbone, coming down at her cleavage, inhaling her fragrance, his two fingers captured her pink bud in between and tweaked them…..rubbing them, pinching them…… her eyes went in her head when she felt his warm mouth covered her curve, taking that in his mouth, kissing it, nibbling it while his other hand kneading her other breast……. She arched back giving him more access scratching his back by her nails, the pleasure he was giving her, it was unbearable for her, so new, they way he is feasting her body, is far from her imagination…..

 

She used to think, whenever they’ll get intimate, he’ll do this  and that first but nothing happened of that sort, he is doing according to his will, giving her more pleasure when he bit the tip of her breast making her scream…… “aah-ha-maan…” she moaned in pain….. he stopped and looked at her face…..

 

 

 

Managed to type this much only….. typed today in 1 hour when I got time….. still I am asking, if there is something I forgot to reveal then pls do let me know…okies…..and will try to give you long epilogue that is next,,okay…..

Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri part-64

pon

 

 

part-64

 

 

He nodded and picked his mobile from the side table, , dialed dadi’s number and he gave the phone to geet……..she chirpily snatched the phone from his hand and started talking with dadi maa and vedu where vedu was complaining on something and geet was solving that, making him understand, ,

 

while maan was staring at her face , how madly she is in love with him, madly, deeply, even he couldn’t locate the exact word of her madness for him…..

 

It was around 1 hour and still she was on phone, talking so much…. Where maan was just staring at her, like lost in her, thinking about her, how can anyone madly, deeply love with someone? Did he deserve her love? Did he really? Though he didn’t behave bad with her but the pain he gave her that is bigger than then the rude behavior……

 

she was half sitting on bed while half is leaning on him while his one hand wrapped around her petite waist holding her so possessively like if he loosened his hold then she will fly away somewhere far , ,

 

He dip his face in the hollow on her neck pushing her curls aside just over where his face tattoo was carved while his other hand travelled down on her arm rubbing it with love, , he was still in deep thought, , why her heart is so nice…… nice….

 

This word is so small giving the name for her loving heart, , something like ummmm……. He was trying to give a name but alas, failed… there is no word in his dictionary that he can give her…… she is beyond them…….

 

Geet stiffened a little when she felt something wet on her shoulder, she looked behind and found maan is hugging her from back, she at once cut the call and turned, cupping his face in her palm, looking deep in his eyes, while another tear trail down on his cheeks….. she was really shocked and worried that now why he is crying? Is he alright? She panicked at once……

 

maan….maan, why are you crying? Kya hua? Batao mujhe” she tried to ask him while he just shook his head and wiped his tears cursing himself that he panicked her just like that, , can’t he see her happiness? She was so happy just before some minutes ago and here he snatched that happiness again…….

 

maan, please tell me…. Kuch to batao, ” she asked him again wiping his cheeks completely….. where he held her hand and started kissing her hand madly “I love you, I love you a lot,….i really love you” he was just speaking on and on, , continuously saying I love you….. she doesn’t what is happening with him, , she silenced him at once by placing her lips on his continuously blabbering lips, taking them in hers , holding his face in her palms……

 

Where he subsided his pain and gave in her kiss, , where another tear fell down from his eyes, a tear of happiness of having her with him, a tear of having beside him in every moment of his life, a tear of joy being with her, a tear of respect which he is having for her in his heart, mind, , a tear of being her soulmate……

 

She back out from the kiss, looked in his eyes, , “I love you too maan…. I know that you love me…” she spoke between her pants….. she breathed in while maan closed his eyes feeling the depth of her words……  “ab mujhe batao, why were you crying?” asked geet holding his face again in her palms making him look in her eyes direct…… he was literally became emotional… “I dunno…. I really dunno why? I just felt like…so…” he spoke……and then slammed his lips on hers……

 

The kiss was slow, but a hungriest one, , both are hungry for each other, craving for each other, a soul searing kiss, , both were nibbling each other lips , maan’s  both arms wrapped around  her small waist tightening his hold, , while his one palm went under her hip pulling her upward, , making her seat on his thighs properly, , her hand from his face slipped and went around his neck pulling him more in to the kiss, ,

 

Their saliva mingled and trailed down from  their lips to their chin, while his tongue entered in her mouth trapping her tongue between his , , his one hand reached upward and found a strap on her bare back……. As soon as he tried to open the hooks, she pulled back from the kiss, , the red hue spread on her cheeks making them crimson red…. She blushed hard….. she felt really shy sitting in front of him only in her bra though she is wearing jeans but wearing only bra is little embarrassing…….

 

Her eyes were downcast, , he left and tighten his hold around her , both touched their forehead with each other panting furiously, their breath also mingled…… “maan” sh e mumbled in her mouth……. “ummm?” he replied her…..he was still relishing the flavor of her sweet lips………… “mujhe ghumne jana hai bahar” she spoke while still blushing,,,,,, maan smiled at her cute demand…… yeah, they are here for that only, , “haan geet, sure…. Go and get ready” he spoke but she didn’t stood from his lap…

 

Actually she is feeling very shy, , now she was sitting in his lap in her bra , he understood her plight….. a small smile tucked around the corner of his lips, , he grabbed his shirt and cover her properly, she looked at him at once, loving his act…. She ran in the washroom at once while maan laid back on the bed smiling, , he put his head on his arms and crossed his legs subsiding his arousal……..

 

After some time she came from bathroom wearing her bathrobe , her long wet hairs teasing her cheeks while he again felt his arousal again….he gulped looking at the wet form , he stood up at once and pulled her into him holding her properly in his arms dipping his head in the crook of her neck inhaling her wet aroma of hers which is really seducing him,, “maan, hum late ho jayenge…. ” she spoke making cute baby face…. Ohh dam he really melted seeing her this face, , “raat mein pakka” she spoke again while he smile like a mother give candy to any child like that geet is bribing him…….

 

Now how can he deny that cute demand……. He nodded and grabbed his towel, headed towards the bathroom…… in that mean time, geet got ready and maan also got ready….. “achha first have breakfast na...” spoke maan…….. “umm okay…. lekin bahar, kisi dhaabe par” she cutely told me……..

 

both headed towards their destination………. Both reached to the high valley and sat there on the one small rock , looking ahead a vast river, , the water is coming from between the rocks and falling down, mingled in the river…..

 

Both were watching the serene view and inhaling the fresh air which is really soothing their mind and body……  maan clutched her fingers in his holding them lovingly , assuring himself that they are together now , no misunderstanding can make them apart…. He love her……

 

 

I know it was short , i managed today this much only, so posted here…. now i’ll update after 12 or 13 june…. cause i am going to stay at my di’s place, , thanks a lot for likes and comments…. silent readers, pls come out and comment here on blog…. pls… as within 1-2 parts, it’ll end…..

love ya

neha

 

Fanaa Hum Mohobbat mein Teri – part-63

pon

 

 

I don’t know how this part came up as I have typed this story after a long time, even I forgot the little storyline too…. For typing this, had to read last 2-3 parts then typed this one….. I’ll give you 2-3 parts may be, even less or so… I am not sure and then epilogue….. actually I was not going to update this story further but couldn’t stop myself and thought to why left this one in mid, , so completing this now……..before some months, I thought to give you 70-80 parts but now cutting it short……. Now please do let me know hows this? If any other secret is there which is not disclose till yet then do let me know….. I’ll work on that in next part……. Thanks a lot for loving this story….

Love ya

Neha

 

 

Part-63

 

his hands travelled on her back, caressing her over the clothes, , the intensity of their burning desires, , maan’s hands reached on her hip pulling her more close, , they were very close to loose their sanity, , their intimate position was like oil in their burning desires, soon he left her mouth , placing his burning desiring lips on her jaw line, the wet full mouth kisses on her jaw line going down on her neck, while she arched back giving him more space,,

 

she clutched his hairs in her fist pushing her upper body more into him, , he brought his fingers on her coat , unbuttoning slowly-2 tracing her cleavage with his finger tips while she moaned his name ever so softly giving him more pleasure…..

 

Maan took her  in his arms and headed towards their fluffy yet warm bed, placing her safely there, while he hovered himself on her smooching on her neck entwining their fingers , his lips trailed down from her neck to collar bone towards the cleavage which is teasing him so badly……..testing his patience from so long, , somehow geet able to took out her fingers from his and at once her fingers reached in his hairs, massaging them, as pleasure was took over them, their erotic breath increasing more……

 

Maan lift her from her back and tried to remove her coat , she helped him moving her arms up, as soon as the coat fell in the far corner of the room, maan’s patience breaking down, but he didn’t want to take her advantage but the need or pleasure was unbearable for him….. he rubbed her arms up & down so intimately that she bit him on his ear lobe, while a moan escaped from his mouth…… the light was all gone from the room as the weather of outside getting worst minute by minute…..

 

Soon her top and his shirt joined the coat in the far corner of the room, and they were feeling each other like a mad person, , like they were hungry from so long, , it is the top most priority for them now………….they lost in each other arms moaning in pleasure and craving for more…… and the finally sleep took over them, they fell asleep hugging each other…..

 

next day, the rays of sun entered in their room through the chiffon curtains , direct fell on their face, , bringing them back from their dreamland, , where geet hide her face in the crook of his neck saving herself from the sunshine…… maan stirred in his sleep feeling her soft form against him, he smiled slightly in his sleep , maan’s warm fingers went behind her back feeling her soft skin sensuously with the tip of his fingers while she glued more in him hiding herself…….

 

He didn’t open his eyes while naughtiness was oozing out from his face like he is upto something…… geet snaked her arms behind his neck holding him in her sleep rub herself more against him, , he smiled in his half sleep, his large palm reached towards her hip, , he held her hip in his palm and pulled her  upward leveling to his face, he moved his face in the hollow of her neck, placing his full mouth kisses there while his hand was rubbing her milky white soft back so sensuously, ,

 

Her hand reached to his back scratching him by her nails, in a swift he turned her, laking her lay down by her down and he hovered on her back, placing his warm yet hungry lips on her back at the lining of her jeans, moving upward smooching lightly yet passionately , while she dig her fingers in the pillow trying to scratch it also like maan’s back….. she was breathing fast, she never felt like this before, this craving inside her, the need of more and more from him, ,

 

His fingers reached to her bra starp and he stopped at once, he looked at the strap for a second then his lips move upward trailing the length of wet kisses , he pushed her all the hairs a side which were blocking the view of her creamy skin and stopping him for moving further………

 

He was about to kiss her madly but the view of her back stopped him from moving further, , he was continuously staring at her neck without blink, , where she was waiting for his kisses but he was looking at her neck, , which is uncovered now, opening her secret to him, , suddenly a happiness penetrate in his heart after getting the shock and he started kissing her neck placing his large palm on her stomach caressing it softly , , her breath hitched as she felt his rough lips again on her back, she tried to turn but his hold was not letting her do so…..

 

Like he heard her mind talk and he turned at once, gazing deeply in her eyes finding something, like asking something, , answers of questions and don’t know when he got the answers and he kissed on her forehead, , a kiss of respect, a kiss of love, a kiss of affection, she felt blessed when he kissed on her forehead, ,

 

She knew that he is little emotional right now but why he is? She placed her hand on his cheek rubbing slightly by her thumb while he pushed his face more in to her palm closing his eyes feeling her love for him….. he felt blessed being with her…… he kissed her palm and she smiled at his gesture……  he hugged her tight murmuring I Love You to her , , there is no bound of happiness for her when she heard his soft voice saying her I love you…..

 

She told him nothing , just hugged him tightly snaking her arms around his bare back…..  after some minutes, he broke the hug and gazed at her face, removing the tendrils from her face, , looking at her with love………caressing her cheek ever so softly by his finger tips, feeling her cute nose, , he bend little and pecked at her cute red nose… “it’s you geet…… it’s only you!” finally he spoke something…… her petals curved in a smile but little confuse why he is saying like that?

 

She raised her brows in confusion asking him to clear it……. “you know what, once I met a girl…. No…I mean I saw a girl who carved the tattoo of my face on her neck….” He gazed in her wet hazels, she knew that finally he saw his tattoo on her back…… she nodded gesturing him to move ahead………..”I was stunned knowing that it was my face , means how can anyone make my face tattoo, , before that I met with that girl, she went away with her friends, I tried to search but didn’t get any clue…….”

 

He sighed , both sat on the bed resting their back against the bed post while geet hugged him entangling her arms around his waist, resting her face on his chest while maan cover themselves with the thick quilt saving from the cold……  she closed her eyes hearing him further……..

 

“why geet?” he paused for a second gulping the pain which he is feeling now, imagining the pain , from she went through just only for carving his face on her neck…… “why this madness geet?” asked maan cupping her face between his palms, , she looked in his deep chocolate eyes melting in him like a chocolate syrup….. she smiled placing her hand over him which was on her cheek……

 

“that madness called love” , these four words from her mouth gave him immense happiness but still pain is there in the deep, somewhere in the corner of his heart, he pulled her more close to him hugging her more, , even a needle can’t pass between their bodies, they were glued to each other like this……. Maan tugged her carnally more into him, , tenderly feeling soft skin of her arms by his large palm…..

 

“maan!” she softly called him, , he rubbed her arm replying her back….. “ummm” , , his eyes were closed still imagining the pain , , she looked at his face knowing that he is sad now because of her but there is no fault of mine, she thought in her mind……..”mujhe vedu se baat karni hai” she spoke making baby face making pattern on his chest with her fingers, , he at once held her fingers in his hand, bringing them towards his mouth and kissed ever so softly , , she was still looking at him with hopeful eyes……

 

He nodded and picked his mobile from the side table, , dialed dadi’s number and he gave the phone to geet……..she chirpily snatched the phone from his hand and started talking with dadi maa and vedu where vedu was complaining on something and geet was solving that, making him understand, , while maan was staring at her face , how madly she is in love with him, madly, deeply, even he couldn’t locate the exact word of her madness for him…..